Basket-ball is Tough

Like a captain of ships I’m rapping script to my boat
Crew and they float too whaling like Moby Dick no joke
And like KOBE quick to yoke and slam dunk on damn punks
A drastic call for basket-ball as a penetrating guard
Devastating to retard and rookies leaving home courts scarred
And like my homeboy A.I. try stay fly dribble in forts hard
Shooting the three pu tit between my legs with a mean pledge
The game winner no doubt wicked
But some cats enter without tickets
With the loud crowd the hate increases
Made a proud basket break them to pieces
They booed the cheers shattered like glass
To my surprise it appears they scattered real fast
Before came had to rent a car from AVIS
Never thought I’ll have an event bazaar like DAVIS
As the frustration expand I ran in the stands to restrain
A fan had a lame plan, must protect my honey in my brain
Thought to wreck this dummy but he backed down to maintain
The peace in the game the coward learned but Howard Stearn
Will fine me very blindly anyway plenty play this game my concern

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Yesterday, 12:29 PM #2
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ok i guess, pretty decent, nuttin speacial. u need to work a bit on the story board. and try not 2 make it bounce some much, other then that it was ok...

i dont even like basket ball i like street, but i believe its the same thing.
long live hot sauce.

check out my latest, lonely at night...

S to the Z

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Yesterday, 12:53 PM #3
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my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...=1#post26319850

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Yesterday, 03:04 PM #4
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leave 2 links from decent feebback....not

"yo dawg, this was a sweet piece mayne"

^ that is not adequate feedback
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Yesterday, 06:27 PM #5
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THAT WAS FEEDBACK FIRST OLF ALL i HAVE TO KNOW RATHER THAT IS TRUE OR NOT YOU DON'T GO SAYING HEY GUY GREAT JOB WITH A TRUE STORY LIKE THAT COME ON MODERATER WHAT UP SON? AND THE NEXT THING IS HOW DO I GET FEEDBACK AFTER I GIVE FEEDBACK WELL I GUESS THAT NEVER CROSSED YOUR MIND HUH?

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Yesterday, 09:22 PM #6
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Sincere love can blend blood into kisses best fear thugs
They may not let go leave your coo-chee wet doe rubs
Thighs listen to club vibes oh he want to grub my pies
Wear loose perfumes that produce blooms in boy’s eyes
TORNADO they scream and beg for the cream between
My legs I stay a queen on edge, go to extremes with dream
Boy’s cock triggers to duty when they see vigor and beauty
My butt brisk and round even Chris Brown may try these fruity
kisses

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