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10-04-04, 06:23 PM | #1 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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Just Fuck It
IP: A190 A400
i know yall read summa my shit that i let git preveiwed, and i was sittin in math class 2day and i figured out the rest of the 1st verse. its raw and needs sum changes but check it:
now im not normally a violent person, unless u give me a reaspn/ but if u pop shit about me, ill shoot u, even if bitch aint in season/ so just cause im a woman dont mean i cant b violent/ in such a sick world, multiple gunshots wont even make media silent/ its like murder is a game, like a sport or a hobby/ hundreds of ppl git killed everyday, but my song aint about 2 git sobby/ i aint tryin 2 preach, i got 2 much of a backround/ but in my case, if rappin effects were like wrestlin, my lyrics a smackdown/ ive been thru tough times, haters hatin my shit/ drugs, sex, and violence, emotional relationships/ bitch u know im talkin bout u, so dont fuckin deny it/ my records out n exposed, so u cant just hide my shit/ u raped me bitch, made me pay 4 my own abortion 2/ but u aint gittin away with this im out 2 torture u/ who woulda known id grow up 2 b such a lyrical genius/ date such a fag, slice off both balls from his penis/ dangle his dick right in front of his face (ha ha!)/ am i suckin hard enough now?! blast fuckin semen all over the place/ cmon, bitch, wanna take advatnage of me now? grab my chest and use me 4 sex/ well i guess i aint got a choice, im 2 high 2 fight back, i knew i shoulda refused that X/ cause i hate u, y the fuck did i date u?/ i should rape u, all iwanted was a thank u/ i did so much shit for u, u never took the time for a glance/ that bitch swingin her thong up in ur face, the hos got u in trance/ do i not mean shit 2 u? i thought that we were sumthin?/ but im stuck another night at home, naked, watchin ur body humpin/ im sick of bein white trash, its time 2 make a come back/ u gonna git ur nuts cracked, im more than just a big rack, boy ima make ur guts clap/ squirtin outta ur mouth, unless u watch the shit u speakin/ im cut all ur limbs off, we aint even close 2 the weekend/ so watch wut u say, else ur out 4 a bitch smack/ think im playin around, but u better just watch yo back!!! FEEDBACK PLEASE!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It Last edited by Eyvon : 10-07-04 at 06:47 PM. Reason: title change |
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10-04-04, 06:35 PM | #2 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
PLEASE!!! uppin 4 feedback!!! HOLLA AT YO GIRL!!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-04-04, 06:58 PM | #3 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
cmon yall.... uppin 4 feedback. tell me wut u think....
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-04-04, 07:09 PM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: BD07 C76E
yo is you related to yvonne + yo im feeln it 7/10.
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10-04-04, 07:11 PM | #5 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
thanx... no, i truthfully didnt even know she was on this site til she claimed i stole her name... mines pronounced (A-von) 2 clear up any misunderstandings.....
UPPIN 4 feedback, yo holla!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-04-04, 07:22 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
lol woooooooooooooooooooo YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe that shit was funny
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10-04-04, 07:23 PM | #7 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
that good?
UPPIN!!! IVE BEEN WORKIN AND I WANT FEEDBACK ON MY NEW SHIT!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-05-04, 07:46 AM | #8 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: 1BA0 E69C
uppin 4 feedback please! i wanna know wut yall think of the "new" eyvon!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-05-04, 03:57 PM | #9 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 1489 1660
That was ill.......a lil psycho but I could feel the emotion in that verse, props. Please check my verse out.
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10-06-04, 07:40 AM | #10 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: 1BA0 E69C
aight, thanx. UPPIN 4 FEEDBACK! I WANNA KNOW WUT YALL THINK!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-07-04, 07:54 AM | #11 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: 1BA0 E69C
uppin 4 feedback please!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-07-04, 12:44 PM | #12 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: E50E 658D
I was feeling the subject matter and you had some real depth and emotion in your words, but stylistically it was pretty basic and the flow was only ok. Keep it up though, I realize this is only a rough draft so the final piece should be dope. 6/10.
P.S. If you got time return the favour and check out "Fulcrum Shift" by me. Peace
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10-07-04, 05:55 PM | #13 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
consider it done! hey is that u in ur sig? if it is u fli boy.... btw, uppin 4 feedback....
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-07-04, 06:35 PM | #14 | ||||
Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
cmon uppin 4 feedback ASAP! thanx peace!!!
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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt ThE NeW kIdS oN tHe BlOcK SuCk A lOt Of DiCk
BoY-gIrL gRoUpS MaKe Me SiCk AnD I cAn'T WaIt TiL i CaTcH aLl U FaGgOtS iN PuBlIc ImA LoVe It |
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10-07-04, 06:46 PM | #15 | ||||
leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: 4AAF 08D4
i thought it was good< better then i was expecting ..*nice job*
i seen ya going for hatefull n sevear shit..lol... some wordin issues but overall you had some nice content.. i liked the nice rack/guts clap line< flowed well..... can ya hit up the diss in my sig??... thanx...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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