My rhymes r sophisticated enough for a scientist
But u can understand them I can promise this
From the glory to the glory to the money to the money
I was always were. Were it was sunny
I didn’t have to grow up in a rough neighborhood
And I didn’t drop out of school
I kept it cool
Especially on the mic
Get shot at I don’t know what that’s like
So the only thing I have in common with the average rapper is skill
And the way I talk might have appeal
Put I’m the average white boy out of the burbs
I didn’t grow up freestlying on my friend’s curbs
My parents had jobs they rolled in the dough
Now I am doing it 4 the way I can flow
Y is that bad
I don't know don’t u think that that’s sad
I had 2 have a bad child hood to rap
Or better yet I would have 2 b black
I did ball in the playgrounds I no this
But they were in Trumbull wit white kids
U no all we did was shoot
And when he did sumting nasty we didn’t hoot
We didn’t have r du rags in the air
Because we didn’t care
Next point wins that's all that matter
And getting into a college and having an Alma matte
I got all right grades and I didn’t flunk out
And now when I rhyme I don’t pout
I just keep it real
And tell you how I feel
I got every meal
I got everything from breakfast to dinner
But I have 2 admit I was a little sinner
But I kept rhyming instead or killing people dead
When I had a test I made sure I read
NOT
But I did formulate the plot
To get out of school
And go 2 Florida 2 swim in a pool
I haven’t lived it yet but I will
Not a straight A student but still
I will pay da bill
when i go to a bar and grill
And have a burger with fries
And I paid I didn’t cum up wit lies
So 2 end it here
I had a good life adn im white y do u care
So that's my story and I’m out
tell me what u think gimme a shout

try to keep the bars same length as much as possible... not a bad attempt though

man u were bitin some shit outta 8 mile there man

"scar and kill, bar and grill"
"im outy, now u know all there is to know about me" that was just changed a very little bit
plus the rhyme scheme was simple and so were the words

come up with some of ur own shit

im sry if i did, i didnt notice it man, when sumtin fits or ryhmes things cum 2 me i just write em down, if i truely did i didnt mean 2 man ima change it right now thne ll just edit it

yeah..just sorta noticed that you are trying to be to much like em,

hes my rolemodel when it cums 2 rap i have the same way of rhyin and i sound like him its weird, i shulda knows it was stolen im mad man

i got another song its liek a depresed song here it is

When darkness falls upon me

im not in control of my life
i feel like grabbin a knife
and goin slice
it cant b dis way
i cant feel this way
i wish this was just another day
its not cool feelin like this
ur moody sad and very pissed
u cant even put all ur poblems on one list
its like happiness left and blew u a kiss
but da kissed missed
mide as well just punched u wit its fist
there aint nuttin 2 luk 4ward 2
just more pain, what else is new
u wanna give up and call it quits
cuz ders always sumtin in ur way like a wall of bricks
u wish ur life was like what u c in flicks
perfect, happy and everything in between
but really its mean, glutany, and greed
and the pain and sorrow grows in u like u feed it
u wanan beat it
but u cant defeat it

Chorus:
u wanna beat it but theres no way no how
and u don’t have a way out rite now
and it wont let u get up
cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get up and jump

It’s a new day
But u still feel da same way
Feelin like death is certain
Like sum1 is closin da curtain
And darkness falls upon u
It sneaks up and surprises u
and yealls out BOO
And u have no way out
So u start 2 pout
Ull do ne thing to get away
So u get on ur knees and start 2 pray
Hopin god is rite there hearing what u say
Hoping he understands u and says ok
Then u start 2 c da light
And u no every thing will be alright
Now u don’t even wanna go to da knife
U start luvin and appreciatin life

u wanna beat it but theres no way no how
and u don’t have a way out rite now
and it wont let u get up
cuz ur 2 depressed just 2 get and jump

Ooooh Text Choruses Are So Guuuuuuuuully....

Ooooooooh

guly?

"the white rapper" my god...

You bit. You actually suck...omfg...this was sad..

sorry, I shouldn't rag on you, but give up...

u have 2613 posts Bruklor
and u havent battled once, y the fuq r u at this site if u dont battle pussy, can u even fuqin rap?
and ill abtlle u and fuq u up bitch

Oooooooooooh J's Merking

Oooooooooooh..Haha

Hasn't Eminem Got Enough Wannabes As It Is?

^^^hahahahahahahaa

lmfao, I don't battle you fucking Eminem cock sucking wanna be.

I can rap, ...and it saddens me that you are at RB rapping, where I rap. I shouldn't have to be around wackness like you.