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Old 08-11-04, 05:53 PM   #1
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Old 08-12-04, 08:32 PM   #2
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I didnt like sounded like a broken record.
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Old 08-13-04, 05:17 AM   #3
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wow. I loved it. thought I'd get good feedback on this one. -1
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Old 08-14-04, 04:53 PM   #4
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Old 08-14-04, 07:59 PM   #5
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Its pretty good for what it is...Im just not fond of the robotic fake voice sound. I don't mean to disrespect but its just my opinion...

I just wanted to add that I liked the beat a lot and the lyrics were pretty good...I thought I was too harsh of the song so I wanted to edit this cause its not bad at all.
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Old 08-15-04, 11:43 AM   #6
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Old 08-15-04, 01:38 PM   #7
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i thought this track was reall good,, i think this is the best you've sounded, you have nice flow in this song and i like the beat a lot too, keep doin it man.......1
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yeah the fake voice and like not having any multies
that hurt too

and the fake voice suonded yterrible
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Typing as I listen:

Track speaks the truth. Could change "RapVerse" to any other board's name and it'd fit in. The rhyme scheme was basic. That Socom mic works well in your vocal range. The effects on your vocals was nice. It's a solid track all in all - not my particular taste - but it works for balance. All in all a solid track - just not my particular taste, but I respect the work in it.

Is it a track for me? no. Is it a good track? Def. I'd give it a 7.5. lost points on the rhymescheme if anything.
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