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Old 05-17-07, 11:55 AM   #1
Young Sin
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Weather Man (Key)

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I was gon because of a drought
Now I'm tha Nigga these niggaz yap about
They like have you have you heard about Sin
Hell yea dont ever fuck wit that men
Got em stumblin over shit all I was is tha paper
Runnin off at tha mouth well have me ready to stick a hater
Fuck tha guns we can go toe to toe round 4 round pound 4 pound
I garuntee that this left and right combo knock ya punk ass down
Then I'ma clown put em in tha grave, you from America tha home of tha Brave
Buty certain parts says its tha home of tha bitch
Like where you from and where you run wit ya click
You pussy punk I'm sick of being tha one you pussy niggaz talk about
I'm a stomp a mud hole in ya ass then You Can watch me "Walk It Out"
niggaz from other areas think we all about dancin na nigga
We cops wheels make cop deals, servin something that'll make them cops ill
You better take a closer look before you ever think about dissin me Home
you Damn Clone, leave alone, you bitch female dog..... here's a bone
I rip when I spit, I realize all you niggaz just bitch
Plus I talk Alot Of Shit... But I can Cuz I'm 17 and I'm runnin tha clicks
I aint gotta work no more niggaz bring tha money to me
N If you try n stop my paper comin in Then I'm comin wit beef
Wit 2 nines 5 tech 2 ak's and nigga you gon be restin in peace
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Last edited by Young Sin : 05-17-07 at 12:03 PM.
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Old 06-01-07, 08:17 AM   #2
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ahh not bad some good lines....good for an off the top keystyle...keep doing what u do keep writing ~1~
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Old 06-02-07, 08:10 AM   #3
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hmm...i suppose his was decent for a key, the lines were kind of streched but ya had some good lines, it didn't flow to good, but ya can work on that. keep doin ya shit son
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