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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1661136
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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me
I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees
I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission
Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?"
gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe
He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police"
In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true
Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you
Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header
Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better
Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard
B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars

(if you dont get this shit youre an herb )

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Socrates...

Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me
I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees
nah played.
I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission
Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?"
weak setup as well as the punch
gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe
He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police"
ok...could of been better
In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true
Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you
seen something similar to this before.
Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header
Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better
old...still a chuckle.
Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard
B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars
nope.

B.I.Detained...

..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch
1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch.
heh.
A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew,
& shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'.
ha
Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay
Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'.
not hard.
Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull
when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul.
lol...ok
Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt,
& yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt.
LMAO...i used a similar line before..
You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna?
Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner.
decent closer


well this battle is pretty much ones sided in my opinion...Brix wins
for having harder punches and a more complex verse, Soc you had a bunch
of old concepts and played punches that i just wasin feelin at all..though
you did have 1 or 2 that gave me a little chuckle you could use some work.
Brix wins for an overall better verse.

V/ Brix

return the favor and vote on my battle as well.

pz

Aight..
..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch
1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch.

hmm, wasnt really feelin it, it was good but idk jus didnt hit, was kinda corn


A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew,
& shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'.

nope, wasnt feelin it,could have been better used some new words and described it more complex


Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay
Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'.

eh,wasnt complex felt kinda elementary wen i read it first time no hate but ok for the personal


Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull
when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul.
ok good personal and punch


Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt,
& yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt.

played...ive heard a lot of lines like this, it just gets annoying wen i see another no hate


You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna?
Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner

nice closer






Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me
I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees

eh...ok


I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission
Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?"

ok...gettin better


gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe
He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police"

nice punch and setp


In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true
Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you

another good punch and setup using wat he said against him


Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header
Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better

heard these kinds of lines before just words r switched around but like efusive said its not that played to the point where people hate it, so good one here


Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard
B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars

ok..an ok closer could it could have tied in with the fashion police


theres my punch by punch analysis then...no hate on you B.I. it was honest vote i just felt socrates had more complex and enjoyable punches, yours felt kinda below him a little good battle to both

good luck peace

B.I Detained:

..you wanna know wack? lemme give you a hunch
1st sign of this is when someone uses " ".. to try & illustrate a punch.
^^ decent opener could have been better 6/10
A.I's been making many a cut.. skills been analysed for an elite crew,
& shit..you ain't gone n0ne..only reason ya still in is b/coz on aim your coo'.
^^just wack 2/10
Fuck the niceties, I ain't gonna be-friend this fucking gay
Your sig' is true, coz after my verse.. 'this IS your last day'.
^^decent personal ok punch 7/10
Honestly son you're nothing.. your text experience is nuttin but dull
when your biggest achievement on RV.. was a fucking little spat with Spul.
^^ehh alright 5/10
Pathetic bitch.. it didn't take long for you to be dragged thru dirt,
& yea I'm stomping on Soc's heels.. plus his stockings & his skirt.
^^nice punch 8/10
You know what best for this site Soc?.. I'll tell you if ya wanna?
Take your faggot hand.. adjust the mouse.. then click the X in the corner.
^^played concept 6/10

overall : 34/60

Socrates:

Fuck battle this guys even to scared to fight people like me
I swear if you tell him "Head up." he justs gets up off his knees
^^lol good shit nice opener 8/10
I aint a e-thug,thats shabba, so drive bi's aint whats my mission
Every time hes late I ask, "How can the bus driver miss it?"
^^kinda weak wasnt feelin it 5/10
gawd damn this aint bi, its a fag, really, please do believe
He wants on his tomb stone "Head Cheif of the Fashion Police"
^^that flowed really good and a decent punch 7/10
In our last battle, i must admit, some of the shit you say is true
Weakest Link, and im the weakest, and you know where it puts you
^^hottest bar of this battle 9/10
Shit, I shouldve just gotten this win put in the fuckin header
Its not that youre whack..........just everybody else is better
^^played concept 3/10
Blah, fuck you lucky hoe, i didnt even drop too hard
B.I.Detained just proves his favorite rhymes are about gay bars
^^good closer 6/10

overall : 39/60

vote: socrates

it was kinda obvious he came harder b.i it didnt look like you put much effort into this battle and underestimated your opponent

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v/ BI.. it was just better.. if you want a break down tell me.. but i really cant be bothered.

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V/ B.I.

Punches- Tie
Personals- B.I.
Creativity- B.I.
Enjoyment/ Comedy- Socrates..
Complex- B.I.

Vote- B.I.

just felt he had a more complex verse..with harder hitting personals and punches were really even.. g'd battle to both.

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B.I. Detained - 4
Socrates - 2

I accidentally deleted the Rick guys vote while cleaning...same score even if it doesn't show it....Up & Over Closed Battles...

phantom
hmmm i dunno man u had some pointless and herbish lines dawg,u had acouple decent or potential ok lines in there,but mostly were way way mad played yo,it sounded like u were being rushed through that verse man....but yeah ok

b.i detained
man u had a nice structure,ur flow was good,i was likin the punches man very nice shit,u came creative in this verse...nuff said this battle was yours from the get go

v/b.i. detained

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B.I. Detained - 5
Socrates - 2

You guys gotta edit with your votes or the scores will be

B.I. Detained - 3
Socrates - -2

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v/bi detianed.. better verse.. good batle tho..

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vote = b.i.

came harder in punches
but overall had a good
structure and hard punches