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Old 10-18-04, 01:31 PM   #1
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Contendership Match: Mike Hawk vs. Sdizzle

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Old 10-18-04, 03:07 PM   #2
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yup 10

shit, i still consider myself the champ so blah to u smoka

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Old 10-18-04, 04:32 PM   #3
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Old 10-21-04, 09:29 PM   #4
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Man. . .

Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons.
Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..


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Old 10-21-04, 10:16 PM   #5
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shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
i say.....
ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too

here...
 
Old 10-22-04, 02:39 AM   #6
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upping .
 
Old 10-22-04, 04:54 AM   #7
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Mike Hawk...


Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons.
old...weak
Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
ehhh.
Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
lol
If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
could of been better
You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..
heh...could of been better.

sdizzle...

shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
played.
i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
heh..
i say.....
ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
ehh..ok
only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
nah...
his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too
decent close

Dizzle wins this battle with a harder verse and less played
punches...maybe if hawk worded his lines better
and had better concepts he could of won...i see
where he was going with his concepts/punches
but as stated above they were worded poor.

V/ sdizzle
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Old 10-22-04, 03:20 PM   #8
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Old 10-22-04, 04:02 PM   #9
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mike-

Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons..
weak

Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
..mmn uhh

Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
too basic

If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
could of been better
filler^

You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..
wack

sdizzle-

shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
mmmn too basic

i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
i say.....
decent i guess

ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
nice

only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
alright personal

his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too
decent


kats-
punches-dizzle
multies-none
perssonals-dizzle
wordplay-none at all
creativity-mmn none really
vocab-tooo basic
metaz-none
flow-tie

for a contendership match..this was A WEAK BATTLe........well both mc's came weak and no hard hitting punches with no multies or no wordplay wat so ever......there was lil creativity and everythin was too basic...
vote- dizzle (came a lil harder and more consistent then mike with his punches...)
 
Old 10-22-04, 04:36 PM   #10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by frein-ma$ter
mike-

Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons..
weak

Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
..mmn uhh

Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
too basic

If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
could of been better
filler^

You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..
wack

sdizzle-

shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
mmmn too basic

i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
i say.....
decent i guess

ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
nice

only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
alright personal

his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too
decent


kats-
punches-dizzle
multies-none
perssonals-dizzle
wordplay-none at all
creativity-mmn none really
vocab-tooo basic
metaz-none
flow-tie

for a contendership match..this was A WEAK BATTLe........well both mc's came weak and no hard hitting punches with no multies or no wordplay wat so ever......there was lil creativity and everythin was too basic...
vote- dizzle (came a lil harder and more consistent then mike with his punches...)

im not insulting your vote, but multies shouldn't have even the slightest effect on the outcome of a battle.... sinse they themselves are unimportant
 
Old 10-22-04, 04:49 PM   #11
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anyway return favor and vote on my battle!
 
Old 10-22-04, 09:52 PM   #12
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mike hawk:

Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons.
^^ good opener decent punch 5/10
Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
^^ lol funny shit good bar 8/10
Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
^^ehh 2nd line stretched not too hott 5/10
If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
^^ lol at least its true 6/10
You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..
^^decent personal on IJL/joke good closer 7/10

overall : 31/50 (62%)

sdizzle:

shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
^^ that first line killed your opener just stupid 4/10
i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
^^ehh ok 5/10
i say.....
ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
^^lmao good shit 8/10
only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
^^good personal 8/10
his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too
^^good name play decent closer 7/10

overall : 32/50 (64%)

vote:sdizzle barely
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Old 10-22-04, 10:31 PM   #13
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mikeie
Sdizzle's a pig, and it looks like hunting season.
He's the most popular kid on the net, for all the wrong reasons.
NOPE

Never had a girl, and what's worse is.
He uses the message boards....
...as a dating service.
WEAK

Dizzle's a rider, he can get shot again and again.
Well, not cuz he a thug, the bullets just wont penetrate his skin.
LOL SICK

If I lose, I wont care if its a wasted rhyme.
Cuz when I say 'Dizzle' it = my worst line.
OK

You wack fool, I should shove a fist down ya throat.
Join IJL, your whole life is a joke. . . . . .. . .. . . ..
GAY

sdizzle
shit you even stole the term soul clap from kanye west
..even in your mind ur old raps only second best
NO

i bet his verse will only have punches dissing my weight
now if thats the case... this time ur only 3 months late
i say.....
OKAY

ur ugly wack and stupid, but u cant follow word for word
sad when even your hands wont applaude ur wack verse
NICE PERSONAL

only newbs ask for votes, so throw mike on the pile
him getting clapped is back & white like his cutom user title
BAD SPELLING,GOOD PUNCH

his borrowed punches arent new, his wit is rarely used
id say his creativity is garbage... but he hawked that too
LOL NICE

for obvious reasons...

v/sdizzle
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Old 10-24-04, 12:52 PM   #14
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Mike hawk , came weak

I would too battlin this clown

SDIZZLE IS GARBAGE AND I HOPE HE IS A MAN AND CHALLENGES ME TO A BATTLE AND DOESNT CONTINUE TO HIDE AND DUCK
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Old 10-24-04, 03:38 PM   #15
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if i ever face u in a league or tournament, then we will battle

but, u suck.... so i dont see that happening

ur a fucking embarrassment to boston
 
 


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