v/ enygma.

Harder punches.. personals were on point.. all lines were effective.. didn`t see you fall off.. structure and ryhme scheme are pretty basic.. but they do the job.. opener wasn`t bad but what`s a mic got to do with text battles? Closer was nice line.. internal rhyme hit it off well.. JPoll.. way too cocky dude.. you explained every line.. not good.. if people don`t get it then too bad.. it looks bad on you if you explain it all.. but alot of your concepts were wack anyway.. what`s Blink182`s relevance to a rap board? really wasn`t feelin` the verse.. no flow at all.. personal`s were non-existant or ineffective.

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4-3 enygma winning stop free posting j-poll or i'll dq you if you got problems with votes pm me don't clog the thread with your complaining

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i vot j poll cause engyma didnt come hard enough but he had some good punches 'plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else' that was a tight line i like. but j-poll said 'Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard, it's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third' that was hard engyma u got some nice bars but u coulda came harder, j-poll u really didnt need to explain ya self it just gave people more to read
v/J

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I guess we can accept that one......kinda fishy, but oh well.....

Jpoll - 4
Enygma - 4

Keep the votes coming......

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uppin uppin....it's not fishy...his ip isn't anything close to mine...uppin uppin

4to4

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Enygma u had a hot line but the punches where good 2 but as liittle off i liked this line the most


Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else

Good BAR


u structure was okay


Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew

Good BAR^^^^..

8.5/10

Jpoll u had good style i liked alot of ur lines

Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks

GOOD BAR ((NICE USE))


'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,

DAt was juss hott PROPS


I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes

NIce shit structure BETTER

9/10

VOTE Jpol

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5 to 4...for me................................................ ...............................

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Aight...

Bar by bar...

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
Hahaha...nice opener...good punch...8/10
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
Good personal...punch coulda had betta wordplay...seemed forced...but good meta....6/10
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
HAHAHA...hot....10/10
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
Nice meta...decent punch....7/10
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
Good punch and closer....8/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good verse overall...couple bars weren't as great as the others but nothing bad....solid verse with funny meta's and good hard hittin punches....wordplay was straight....flow was good...good drop...

Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'
Not that great of a personal...coulda gone places wit it but bad wordplay and it was stretched...4/10
Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
Okay meta...but no hard punch....5/10
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
Still not feelin you....5/10
Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
Hahaha...gettin betta....8/10
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
Don't like these meta's...stretched too....5/10
Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
A lil betta....7/10
I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
Now this was a good bar....9/10
Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
Not that great...6/10

Verse Score - 49/80 = 61%

Aight your verse wasnt as good as i expected it to be...Just boring punches and meta's....couple bars were nice but u have to come hard against high level emcees....lot of ya shit was stretched wit fucked up ya flow....so work on that....jus keep elevatin and use harder meta's....

Vote - enygma....keep droppin yall....nice battle but expected both emcees to come a lot harder...

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look this was not that hot of a battle...but enygma got this one...

NYGMA:you was aight could have came wit some betta punches and alot of betta personals....and your ryhmes were a lil stretched....this was not your best work...
wasnt too interested in reading your shit.....just come a lot harder next time aight..
all in all 8/10

POLL: oyu was coo just didnt likle the fact that you had to explain your bars...and it was alil hard to read,..structure was aight..and your punches were too weak...you also need to put a li mo personal;s and not as much meta4s...they are goo dbut too many can kill your flow....all in all7/10

vote=nygma

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didn't i win 5 4 though...that was a rule...that the match was over after someone got 5 votes

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Actually if you read the rule carefully, it says when someone gets ahead by 5 votes.....

JPoll - 5
Enygma - 6

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hahaha actually it's 5 to5 lumes votes doens't count...he's blacklisted

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Why don't you stop bitchin......Luminaz explained his vote 3 times....If you want to throw out all the votes from people we've battled then we wouldn't have any votes. Plus $$upreme is on my blacklist...you don't hear me bitchin about that.

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6-5 for enygma atleast that's my count uppin for votes

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