deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings
See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack
I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track
I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try?
When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life
I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude
Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you
Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show
Then pack up and leave relaunched...
just get in ya van

and go

so i guess thats your rhyme huh, wow this should be quick

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

lmao @ dirtboy letting you in the league twice.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

yeah i came to check in and thats what i see, whoa

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

A.I.

BTW... sign out Ad... lol

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How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy

See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer

Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme
BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING

So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike

you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade

SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery
cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me

ooooh

this is so close, i liked both of yer verses! alot! i laughed my wretched white ass off at alot of the punches, im having a hard time deciding...

i loved this line "Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you" from Adebisi but your rhimes and vocab just tapped a little under the belt to Vango...
Vango I loved the second and last lines... they were awsome...

altogther i enjoyed this battle, really thought it was close but my vote goes to Vango

Vanca had better rhimes however

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tight battle
had me laughin my ass off
tight structure and flow from both
u both hit wit sum gud punches usin gud vocabs

basically i was just feelin Vango a lil more and i thought his punches hit slightly harder but this was another tight battle!!

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Anyone with any idea about battling care to vote?

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Not the best verse I've seen you drop chrit by any means:

Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings
i've seen this concept before, but nice punch
See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack
I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track
ok, ok.. not as great
I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try?
When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life
also played concept but still nice
I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude
Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you
this was ok
Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show
Then pack up and leave relaunched...
just get in ya van

and go
good wordplay off his name, but the closer wasn't that great

Vango.. it seemed to me like you were stressed out.. and forgot to bring it:

How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy
nice multis, but the punch is pretty weak
See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer
ok, nice use of meta and nice flow, punch not that great
Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme
BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING
yeah that might work against a newb.. but i think the punch loses some effect against vets.. anyway ok punch
So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike
your verse was good until this. this sucked hard. two lines, totally unrelated, elementary rhyme, jokes I've head 10 years ago...
you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade
this was kinda cool, but again it kinda messed up the flow of your verse to just randomly have this in there.. and its not a great punch
SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery
cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me
chance of winning the lottery punches are played, and you didn't flip it creatively... that closer was just kinda weak

Ok so basically you both had punches I wasn't really feeling and some punches I was feeling, but adeb had way more of the second category, and also at least brought a personal with the name.. I didn't see that from Vango.
also he used less played concepts, so v/adeb.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Even though Adebi won , Adebi verse was pretty weak compared to what i`ve seen him do then again . . He is against Vango.

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Not quite legendary yet....

"See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer"

"Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme
BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING"

"cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me"

vango im sure heard those exact punches before, maybe u used them in one of ur other battles, if im wrong i apologize, and if so nice punches apparrt from the fire one

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breakdown


Vango? Hell no... I'm tired of these fucking newbies
So I'll knock ya the fuck out... with just my mood swings
6.5
See what it brings... when you be flipping concepts that are still wack
I mean kids got more throwback rhymes in his verse than a Fabolous track
9
I've had it you fag, you cant win... so why try?
When Boys to Men isnt a group... it describes ya sex life
8
I'm that nice... while you're just another ugly dude
Halloween was months ago, but I still have an urge to chuck candy at you
7
Sure to lose... so honestly kid... conteplate a no-show
Then pack up and leave relaunched...
just get in ya van
and go
9

How you got the audacity to test my mental capacity,
im like Billy the Kid of RB, so why dont you hop along Cassidy
7
See im gonna keep this rhyme short like your rap career
cuz if rappin was alcohol youd be a lite beer
8.5
Tastes great, naw this kid is less fillin, see id write a better rhyme
BUT YOU REALLY AINT THAT APPEALING
7
So why dont you be a good boyscout and go take a hike
this cats so stupid he tripped over a cordless mike
8.5
you battlin me is like a sword with no blade, a gun with no bullets and a lamp with no shade
7.5
SEe you got as much chance of beating me as you do winnin the lottery
cuz you could douse your self with gasoline,set your self on fire and still not be as hot as me
7

break down
vango 45.5/60 76%
adebisi 39.5/50 79%

v-adebisi