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Old 05-03-04, 10:42 AM   #1
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L.I. vs. shadow's edge

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battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
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no dick riding
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 05-03-04, 11:42 AM   #2
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ugh... we just battled last week... and blah... is it too late to get this changed.. i want someone new
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Old 05-03-04, 03:38 PM   #3
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^^^fasho...we just battled 3 days ago........
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Old 05-03-04, 03:55 PM   #4
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like i knew that rematch then really who won last time?
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Old 05-03-04, 04:10 PM   #5
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its still open........
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Old 05-03-04, 04:24 PM   #6
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feed off that match for beef then whatever either way i've already had to change one match i'm not changing another
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Old 05-03-04, 08:16 PM   #7
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Aight... I'll have mine up by tomorrow, sick of getting nothing but herb votes
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Old 05-04-04, 03:04 PM   #8
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I’m just fucking around with this one folks… check it:

Yo I got a predilection for superior diction, your skills – just fiction
And here’s some funny shit about that dirtboy’s prediction:

Quote:
Originally Posted by dirtyboy69
L.I. vs. shadow's edge: ...
i'm taking shadow's edge to win.


He made that after I told him "I'ma no show"... I don't even gotta drop
You should be used to being underdog though... you girl like it on top
Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen
Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen
0-1, peeped your battle son, no wonder you dropped out
Hey maybe you can try again…
…when you get pubes to sprout

Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text
My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks
Man.. y’all know I really hate to be the one to tattle
But if you wanna see how his line gonna end…
… just peep my last battle
Take all five days g, you might as well earn this defeat
I leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat
Together we nasty… cuz I’m sick and just left you twisted
And my punches hit so fucking hard your mom just got fisted
Read this verse and you star struck…cuz you just got sonned
Face the facts son, there’s no need for me to run
You couldn’t drop an ill verse if you had all of MM enlisted
And your audio must be ahead of its time…
... cuz your fans still haven't existed



Aight, take your five days to try to match this shizzo
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Old 05-04-04, 07:01 PM   #9
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I just love how this guy thinks he can beat me...alright man....heres sumtin to shut you up.....
Quote:
Originally Posted by quickpunch
Shadows...seemed like u were lost...ur flow didnt flow good nor ur structure...its either me or ur shit wasnt connectin...u had some ok punches...but the shit sometimes didnt make sense...U NEED 2 WORK ON UR STRUCTURE AND FLOW SO IT'LL BE EASY FOR US READERS 2 READ AND COMPREHEND...

^^All feedback was the same on our last battle, only negativity was directed at your verse...
Cockiness got him sayin crazy shit, take all ya winnin predictions and see them reversed...
Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes....
Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets...
Than you rep ya crew, only four members, it aint even large...
No wonder your crew fucking sucks, they have you in charge!...
The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise…
And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese…
And how you gonna edit your verse post and than act like no one will notice...
Its straight, you can edit after i dropped, still get the loss afta feedin off this...
Stead of visitin tutorials afta ery battle, receivin losses by the bunch...
Grow fists, maybe you'll have a chance at landin a real fuckin punch...
For real this bitch knows deep down he loves me, dog im like an idol to you...
I make peoples 'heads' turn when my 'shoulders' brushed off so he copped the shampoo...
Shoulda at least tried against enygma cause you had no chance in this one...
14 vs 18, punches, flow, personals, and metas...merked you and i aint even begun...

Explanation for closer....14 vs 18 = ages....jus so yall understand that lol....
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Old 05-04-04, 08:12 PM   #10
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tight battle

flow is a tie...both y'all dropped nice spits and i felt it easy to get into both, i was feelin them both. structure, givin this to shadow cuz L.I ure lines were stretched in parts and others were fairly short. shadow didnt have a perfect structure goin on but it beat ures. punches was the hardest to call cuz both y'all came wit hard punches u know, both showed a lot of creativity, especially L.I utilizin them links as you regularly do well. some hard punchlines in there and sum nice personals to with a few aight multis in there i think. i judge this one down to who had the best line in the battle cuz it was so close
BEST LINE
And how you gonna edit your verse post and than act like no one will notice...
Its straight, you can edit after i dropped, still get the loss afta feedin off this...

that was a gud funny line from L.I. giving him my vote!!
gud spit from both y'all tho. NUFF RESPECT!!

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Old 05-04-04, 08:16 PM   #11
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wow ^^ that shit's gay, i edited my post because the quote from dirtyboy was fucked up. cry me a fucking river. and it was an hour and half before you posted. seriously...
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Old 05-04-04, 10:22 PM   #12
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I thought this battle was OK.....

Shadow came pretty hard with a good flow..... His punches were hittin well and his shit was kinda personal....Overall he had a solid verse.......L.I came OK but his stretched lines made it flow awfully. His punches suffered because of it. And I saw that punch about the # of members in his crew......cause I made it up.

Best line:
Together we nasty… cuz I’m sick and just left you twisted
And my punches hit so fucking hard your mom just got fisted
^^^
This one made me chuckle a bit....

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Old 05-05-04, 08:44 PM   #13
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i think L.I won dis battle coz he had betta punches and his flowed alot betta. Plus he wasnt too cocky.
 
Old 05-05-04, 09:19 PM   #14
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^^ that doesn't come close to counting kid
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Old 05-05-04, 10:34 PM   #15
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this was a hott battle shadows edge u had some killer punches and that hott personal your wordplay was sick and some nice multies..structure was a lil messy but it flowed well so that dont matter...

best bar:Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text
My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks

worst bar:Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen
Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen

overall: 7.5/10

L.I also had a ill verse but i just wasnt feelin it as much as shadows some of your bars were stretched...you had some ill punches and some good personals..good meta's and wordplay was good..i think if your structure was better u would have had a hotter verse

best bar:The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise…
And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese…

worst bar:Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes....
Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets...

overall:6.5/10

vote:shadows edge i just think he had a better overall verse with better punches...L.I had a sick verse too but shadows took this one

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