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Old 05-17-09, 06:21 AM   #1
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Exclusive, that new shit. JTR - Dissection

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http://www.zshare.net/audio/60140269fe380b62/

^^ Smoke weed just like a Chinese Buddhist
Do Chinese Buddhists smoke weed? I don't know, I'm so fucking high man ahahahahahaa suck meeeee


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Old 05-17-09, 07:50 AM   #2
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and if anyone says I bit eminems concept.. I wrote this shit like 4 months ago

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Old 05-17-09, 09:23 AM   #3
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Intro is kinda lame, not feeling the beat, you got a nice flow, dont you mix? If you dont know how just send me your acapellas ill do it I dont give a fuck, lol you love makin cocky songs huh? haha . The hook is just bad , no hate but dont like it
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Old 05-17-09, 10:17 AM   #4
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The hook was a joke and I enjoy it for comedy purposes lol

wtf @ chinese buddhists smoking weed anyways

the whole 2nd verse was me just being weird and fucking around too but I think it's cool lol

I don't mix when it comes to tracks like this lol, this beat sucked, it's something I wrote with a friend over 4 months ago blazed as fuck that I just got blazed and decided to record yesterday/today w/e

im more looking for feed on the verses rather then the chorus

and yea I do a lot of self swagger cocky tracks but I do everything else too, it's only this shit that i've posted on RV, my more serious shit wont get posted up here lol

and i'll send you some shit if I need it mixed, just not anything like this cuz this aint worth mixing haha
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Old 05-17-09, 10:31 AM   #5
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I just cut out the intro cuz I noticed the flow was off, so now it goes straight to the first verse, hook, second verse...

funny this shit started off with 3 verses and 3 hooks lmao
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