10 lines u can spit first

newb your tryin to take a veteran ya get merked,
mah lines poison ya hope the antidote werked,
your gettin ripped so call me turkey shears,
I spit poison so you can say im ill i give you fears,
you commin wit a hard punch is somethin RARE,
left you burried in you lines ya settin off flares,
ya bout to taste illness commin out form the mines,
i could merk you wit a 1-2 punch.... thats 2 lines,
last punch, eat ya like lunch, i think ya fake i got a hunch,
punches form ya r rare like da return of The Brady Bunch....

Merked and Poisoned.... Come up with an Antidote

no need for an antidote, nothing done to me was harmful/
to beat me is a plan-or-hope,thinking he did it, he is a darn fool/
this guy claims to be a veteran, steppin to a newb gotta ask himself a question/
claim to be a poisoness human specimen, but u cant even cause a simple fuckin infection/
probaly only person ever to mistake his pimple for his erection/
illness coming from the mines? is that ur damn roar/
i know u a veteran but this isnt the Veitam war/
rhymes like these are so RARE but then it so precious/
after i am done i will leave ur ass breathless/
but when u battling me u better expect, this


uppping for votes....nice lines syanidal or atleast some

upppin for some votes............................................. .................................................. . damnit

Uppin!1

yo syan took this battle it looks like but i'm jsut not the only one who can vote gotta wait on that

upping for more votes man.... com'on now lets vote so this can close and i can get on wit battling

and do u understand the

illness coming from the mines? is that ur damn roar/
i know u a veteran but this isnt the Veitam war/

cuz i mean that is not hard to understand but when i showed someone it they didnt get it

Syanidal took this for numerous reasons

1.Rare..your first line was feeding off his verse..that is sooooo gay
2.Rare your lines was stretched
3.Rare your punches wasnt great
neither was syandl but it was better than..my vote~syan

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105535

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uppin 2 cmon people VOTE!

syanidal had some funny verses and overall merked rare. It was close tho

vote = syanidal

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I have like a ton of votes on this but the fag I'm against doesn't want to loose so he keeps reporting them as d/r's or something so I'm down to 2. So just give me back my rightful votes.

Blend Vs. Kasper

Aight all of us agreed on that Syn took it but most of em aint explaining the reason beside sayin it was funny or it was tight......

break down:

Punches: Sya
Personal: Sya
Enjoyed: Neither...basics
Wordplay:Sya
Structure: Sya
Flow: Sya

It was one sided yes but i explained why.....anywayz Return the favor and poll vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106043

thanks (Vote Honest)

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i cant poll not enuff posts uppin 3

hey syan how many votes u get till this thing is closed? thanx man