Step your rhyme game up, and put your best foot forward
With the exception of Jonathan Mill, the talent has been dormant
Like psychoanalysis, I explore the conscious mind looking for disorders
Trying to find a relationship between supernatural influences and forces
My behavioral patterns are the symptoms of a disease
Following a ritual rhyme scheme and stick to the routine
I practice transcendental meditation, I think you should try it
When I close my eyelids, I find myself in solitary confinement
What you would call a freestyle, I call it abstract expressionism
My spontaneous and impulsive application from an specific instance
This is metaphor galore, I get deeper then bottomless
Why the style you settle for, make me lose consciousness
Elevating like levitation, or the leaves in the canopy
When I plummet from the summit, I fracture limbs w/ flying knees
Most fail where I succeed, I proud of my accomplishments….
Receiving compliments, from kids on other continents
I can’t stand when retarded kids try to spit hard like this
Then they become targets for this marks-man archery kit
If a superior word selection is shown in the right order
Your opponents with inferior achievements has to fight harder

*GONE*

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Ya'll don't show love for the new guy?

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I feel like a mattress.

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This was alright. But nothing really pulled me into it. Ur vocab was nice but for ur flow the lines seemed kinda stretch, so u may wanna work on that. Everything else was cool, just continue to do what u do and u'll get better. Please rtf on anything in my sig. Thanks and Peace.