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Old 11-22-04, 12:57 AM   #1
fluidmoon
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no hate at all, i respect you both, doin ya thing~
avy~you had some good lines, your concepts and vocab were good here, but your lines were mad strectched,you tried to say a lot, but couldnt fit it in your verse, which threw the flow off completely,your opener was ok, your verse got better as i read on,liked the pussies you rode line,,,good one,liked the baby colic lines, umm,your closer was ended this nicely, good job here..
IDH~nice name personals and wordplay with that concept, you had a tight verse here,but i feel that miss avy had more creative punches and disses in her verse,your vocab was good,but i also think avy used better vocab here as well,
hmmm, i know avy stretched her verse out,,,and IDH really didnt come off to me that strong....this was tough,,,but i'ma go with creative words here........avy on this...again,,honest,,no hate here...
VOTE~MISS AVY
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