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Old 10-25-03, 07:56 AM   #1
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DZK - The Great Below

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Old 10-25-03, 08:12 AM   #2
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Top shelf work once again mate..beat is pretty deep..scary kinda haha..Lyrics are some for real type shit ay..you deliver your parts very well man..Pretty full on man..Depressing shit haha with that singin and all..like hypnotic haha...Its well put together for sure..excellently done in fact..its fucken hard to do this but woah! this is really well done...keep up the dopenuss mate..Pz..
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Old 10-25-03, 12:19 PM   #3
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yo this shits tight as hell.. as usual..
its actually kinda wierd for me to see DZK postin here,
ive been listening to your shit off of soundclick for like 5 months..
all tight shit.. so in my head your kinda of a celebrity, although i know your not really famous. but your a tight fuckin rapper and
I wouldnt be surprised at all if u make it BIG. I think i might be
surprised if you didnt end up makin it BIG. Good Luck bro.
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Old 10-25-03, 02:11 PM   #4
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god damn dawg this shit is too nice lol. The L had me goin on this shit. flow is sick and content is deep. shits dope. keep droppin dawg

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Old 10-25-03, 05:29 PM   #5
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thanks yall
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Old 10-25-03, 07:31 PM   #6
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Production is tight, beat is aight

lyrics is good, flow is aight, delivery is good, chorus is aight

6/10
good track
keep it up
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Old 10-25-03, 08:55 PM   #7
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Old 10-26-03, 06:56 PM   #8
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thanks yo!
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Old 10-27-03, 03:01 AM   #9
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Man i loved it...the pic of that girl in ur lyric part..is that the one who commited suicide..very deep i liked it heaps might d/l


Pz..i wan see more like that
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Old 10-27-03, 03:18 AM   #10
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Ill track, never liscened to your stuff before, but now im checkin it all out ...

Deep lyrics, makes it alot better because makes you feel where the artist is comin from...

I liked chorus, and flow was ill through-out whole song...


I wanna speak to you on AIM next weekend..... jus ask some questions...

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Keep comin up with tracks like this , good work

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Old 10-27-03, 06:08 PM   #11
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This was a complete production, a full song. Very deep shit. i was feelin the part about passin the caskit and not lookin cause you could keep her in your memories (that shit was cold as fuck). what else: good sound quality, mic presence flow was also displayed well and intricate. A real nice drop. 1
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Old 10-28-03, 12:57 PM   #12
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this ish was deep, beat was perfect for this topic, flow was sick as usual,lyrics hit the spot, hook is nice never thought id ever hear u sing. keep droppin hottness
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Old 10-28-03, 01:26 PM   #13
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ONLY complaint...talk over that 45 second long intro....just some crazy talk...make it pan left to right..or pahse all over...whisper it...

shit will sound rediculouslly dope...

the track was sick

everything you spit is sick

period

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Old 10-28-03, 10:51 PM   #14
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omfg, beat is off the hook... feelin your emotion, presence and flow on this... feelin the hook... overall: iLL...keep it up dawg
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Old 10-29-03, 09:00 PM   #15
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you and engineer suck dzk
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