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exception | 1 | 20.00% | |
wordplay | 4 | 80.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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12-17-03, 06:50 AM | #1 | |
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exception vs wordplay
IP: ABE5 5A5C
the rules as you posted them...
10 Bars max. No dick rides. No hate votes. No Used or biten verses. must check in. checkin in... you spit first |
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12-17-03, 06:54 AM | #2 | |
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iight checkin in.
post up quick b like withen the next hour or so iight. Voters explain ya votes iight none of dat shit voting |
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12-17-03, 07:10 AM | #3 | |
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iight look.
Dis kid wordplay cant even manage to play scrabble let alone string a good enough verse// Leave this kid in his box every Mc that steps up 2 me gets the curse~fuk dat shit each one leaves in a hearse// Grab da mic force it down his throat so him and his mum get some thing hard to Choke~on// He only got me to drop first to fuel his ideas just a excuse to use my verse to feed~upon// Id drop more dam 10 bars just the fact that he couldt last the pace wit a mc like me// Blow this battle wide apart smash Word~away~from~play just like im spittin T.N.T// My rhymes hack away at da skin to da bone like my tounge is a sword// Ill put my hand throw ur back not even botherin to think just snap ur spinal cord// iight done post up b |
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12-17-03, 11:03 AM | #4 | |
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IP: A661 7EB0
yea im still waitin fo ya dam verse b hurry up and post i seen u up on da forum and ya ant posted shit yet
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12-17-03, 06:44 PM | #5 | |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
even if I lost my torso, you'de be the one that's half as tight/
actin' like you grabbed a mic, any other time, than karaoke night/ you couldn't play with words, if one tapped you and yelled tag/ in a manner of speakin' I'll weaken your rhymes, till you fade away/ people told me to have a heart, go easy on em, fuck that, we've only got beef, cause his dad didn't wear a condom/ even with a phone call, you and skills wont connect/ if your prone to sweat, I bet you'll perspire to death/ I'll just match your bars ayite.. ya'll can vote now |
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12-17-03, 08:42 PM | #6 | |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin' for votes............................................. .....................
up up and aww fuck it....vote ya'll |
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12-17-03, 08:48 PM | #7 | |
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
uppin for votes again........................
,...........................................^^^^^^ ^^^^^^vote |
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12-17-03, 08:55 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 7E62 6C19
open:word
closer:Ex punches:Ex enetertainment:Ex flow:word structure: Ex metas:none multis:none vote-Ex nice drops by both of u, but Ex make ur scentencss shorter vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99100 |
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12-17-03, 08:56 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 7E62 6C19
in metas i meant to put Exception not none
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12-18-03, 04:03 PM | #10 |
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opener:wordplay
wordplay:tie punches:word (exception your punches were too played) personals:word flow:exception structure:exception vocab:tie multis:tie overall:wordplay...both verses were okay, exception you have good flow and structure but your punches were kinda weak and you didn't use that many personals.... closer:word
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12-18-03, 04:06 PM | #11 | |
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thanks for the vote diverse....still uppin' for votes
up up and aww fuck it ^^^^^^^^^vote ya'll |
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12-18-03, 04:13 PM | #12 | |
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wordplay won this with better flow, strucutre, punches plus...
exception used a line thats used in so many verses its not even funny the hearse line is old so i wusnt feelint hat at all which almost ruined your verse sooo My VOte-wordplay.... yall both vot eon the battles in my sig highlited in white... ThanX...... Peac3____________------------------____________......................
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12-18-03, 04:54 PM | #13 | |
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mah votez on wordplay...both of yall waz good doe**********************************
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12-19-03, 05:05 AM | #14 | |
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IP: CEF5 716F
opener:wordplay
wordplay:tie punches:word personals:word flow:word structure:exception vocab:tie multis:word overall:wordplay... |
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12-19-03, 05:07 AM | #15 | |
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IP: CEF5 716F
I'm guessing my vote isn't gonna count because it looks like a dickrider vote...so just ignore it.
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