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28 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

Good Luck..

Come Dope.

check goodluck hot. word

check in GL spul.....................................

word 3rd spul-hotshh match up in 3 KORV's. illy yo. gl Hot....


mic check... 1,2....

I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked
You might have your key to victory...
...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked!
It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact
Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck
I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether...
.................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts!
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill
Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste
It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse
Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude
I'ma peace out this puzzle...
.....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you!

gl spul
aiight #3 rank, aka dr.punchlines aka john cena aka reckless
ESPY is a sports award , dont get it, ask me

aiight lets go
2-0 against this kid

I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns
Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around
Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love
Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs
Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard
Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went
Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog)
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic
Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights
Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said?
So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass
And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding...............
..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room

upppppppin' this for votes......... ~_~

I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck
I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether...
.................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts!
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse

vs.

Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room

Alright, so this battle was close as hell. SPuL came with a pretty good verse. Some of the shit was still played and not hard hitting like they key / locked out line. But, some of it was pretty dope. He came with quite a few nameplays, and I thought a few of them were good. Hotshh started out slow in his verse. I remember thinking like, it was ten lines in and he only had 4 lines of quotables. He started picking it up though. He did have a lot of older wordplay though. Like, address / a dress, outstanding / out standing, mass (short for Massacheutts) / preachers.. shit just wasn't fresh. Hotshh! still came with some good shit and that line about SPuL battling himself was dope even though it wasn't worded into a massively hard hitting punch. That was just one of those shits where you post the link and it speaks for itself. UMass shit was cool.. Just, an overall pretty nice verse too. So, what it came to me was quotables and SPuL has them in favor of 8-7. He gets my vote. Dope ass battle though, for real. This shit could go either way.

Vote - It's SPuL

aiight thanks for vote..... upppppppp

tomorow.........

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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
This line was terrible
So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked
You might have your key to victory...
...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked!
okay, but played
It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact
Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match
Really corny, no punch to this
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
alright i guess
Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
not really a harsh diss
I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck
I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether...
.................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts!
not a diss really, just a statement
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
lol, i laughed, but this is still not a harsh punch
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
I seen this shit before, yuck
You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill
Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill
pointless shit is played
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
okay wordplay, you could have made a good punch out of this, but ya used it wrong
I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste
It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race
again, okay wordplay, but no punch to this
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
seen lines similar to this one, also not really a punch
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse
very stretched, needed rewording... kinda played but okay
Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude
I'ma peace out this puzzle...
.....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you!
no punch to this

vs.

I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns
Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around
address shit is played, but ya used it well
Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
no punch to this
Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love
Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs
smokin' shit is played and hitting bases is played, but actually the way ya used this concept was quite nice
Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard
Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors
Similies just aren't that harsh
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
Needs rewording but not bad
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
also needs rewording but not bad
I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went
Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment
pretty played
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog)
If there's wordplay in this, I just don't get it
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
ah man, this concept is ill, but you fucked it up. Still okay though
You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic
Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights
okay attempt for a personal, but isn't that harsh really
Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said?
So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs
just too basic and nothing harsh really
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
good concept, not worded that great... if you had said like "Why does it seem Commercial breaks from it seem to last forever?" just hits harder
That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass
And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding...............
..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash
outstanding shit is very played, sorry
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room
pretty decent

Hmm, here's the way I see it. Spul, I haven't read your stuff before really so I don't know if this is your usual style. Sorry if my criticism of your stuff was so harsh, if someone likes your style I could see them enjoying your verse, but I just felt like your verse was corny and like I was reading off a joke site. Hell, you probably got some of your shit off of a joke site. To me, rap battling is more about being harsh than funny and your shit wasn't harsh. I've also seen almost every line you used before.

Hotshh, you were very inconsistent. You had some tight concepts like the Umass one, the closer was okay though I've used something similar to it before, commercial shit was okay, mortgage line okay, rest was kinda played, guess you just hadn't seen them before but yea i have.

This battle I think could be close, depends on what kinda verse you like. I felt Hotshh!'s verse was pretty average, some nice shit and some eh shit, and spul just came with a lot of corny jokes.

Vote - Hotshh!

I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
haha, didnt git it at 1st, but then i did, aight opener
So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked
You might have your key to victory...
...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked!
lol, aight
It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact
Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match
ehhh
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
gittin out of sumthin n losin it r 2 different thangs u silly girl
Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
haha, thas aight
I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck
I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether...
.................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts!
that wuz pritty nice
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
lmao
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
lmao
You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill
Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill
aight
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
nice
I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste
It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race
lol, n spul wants 2 put hiz weiner in hiz buns, ohhh
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
lol, aight
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse
haha
Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude
I'ma peace out this puzzle...
.....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you!
i dont git it

VS

I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns
Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around
haha. although that cursed shit could b considered feedin, scence spul sed bout cursed, but i dont think it should b
Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
ehhh, i think i git it, lol
Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love
Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs
i dont git it at all
Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard
Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors
haha, nice
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
ehhh
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
ha :S
I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went
Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment
fuckin ill
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog)
haha
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
niiice
You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic
Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights
ehhh
Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said?
So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs
lol, but dam i hate it wen ppl ryme hed wif legs n shit like that
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
ha
That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass
And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding...............
..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash
lol
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room
lmao, nice closer

aight, i wuz expectin betta frum both. spul, ya shit wuz funny, but like, a stupid kinda funny. corny ass shit, lol. N. Tavarez, i wuz expectin ALOT betta frum u... alot of ya punches werent even really punches, 2 me anywayz. whoeva wins this iz gonna have 2 come alot harder in tha final round. both yall shit wuz just like "o hehe" but i wanna see shit thas gon make me go "ohh shit! hahaha" nom sizlaxin?

werd

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So it's...

1-1

Vote up fucks..

ROFLMMFAO

how tha fuck did i fogit 2 even say who i vote fo? lmfao, shit

v/spul, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill
Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse

VS.

I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns
Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around
Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went
Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog)
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic
Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass
And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding...............
..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room


8 to 12.

Hot came more creative here, spul came better in past rounds and seemed to fall off a bit here.

Good battle.

V./ Hotshh.

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