name switch, same shyt, toilet is the same......shyt
came quick, lame bytch, damn, forgot her name.......shyt



uh.....


back in this bytch like i missed sumthing
flow been water, so i stay in the mist of things
interesting, naw u cats don't interest me....
wit ya iron on rhymes, tryn' to impress me
wit a pad and pen, how i do my deeds....
u guest in my house, tryin ta do my deeds
would say suck these, but when u tryin to succeed
u achieve amazin' things cause u known ta suck seed
Please........

if u Pilot my life wit da gun device......
ya better think thrice, cause I Palm twice
but i'm all for life, ......after death
this is my game, u get last after next....
u basatrds all vexed, get plastered and pressed
tryin to cross me, like God in the flesh

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I was born ta reign, like a cloud in da sky
now u clowns ask me why, im down ta die
for the D, where i was raised, to think on my feet
either, get paid, or wear ya brains on ya sneaks
niggaz, stay in da streets, twenty-four seven
livin hell on earth, lost, aint no thoughts 'bout heaven
where time is of the essence, so a second is precious
and the second u second guess, ya ass left breathless
living, young and restless, can't slumber and work
tomorrows not promised, so sleep, when ya under the earth
since birth, we under a curse, no obligation ta reverend
lifes a bitch, eventually rollin' a combination of seven
so we, savor the moment, tho the flavor is pungent
holdin our stomach, wanna vomit, but we seekin the summit

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The potential was there, it just appeared to be hidden
now im driven, on a mission for to that, sole position
andretti, forever ready, earn hard like Earnhardt
a belt saved West but let Dale die in his car
im dynin' to spar, let me find a star~wit~sum~heart
like a car ~n~ park, a lil'spark, 'll get me to start
be smart, my text art results in flesh ripped apart
wit a remix on dmusic, over the beat of ya heart

listen.......

neva one for beef, liked to choose wut i eat
whether leaf or meat, made sure my meal was complete
complacency, amazingly, was neva a way for me
so i waited patiently, why these patience evaded me
and anxious invaded me, while my concious ate at me....


back in this bytch like i missed sumthing

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uppin for some feedback

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uppin in this piece

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was alright needs work in some places but prolly the best newbie stuff ive seen this month....:thumbsup:

thanks.... that was cool....*couff*nominate me*couff*

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i need feedback, not just views

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damn homie, i didnt know u got down like dat.....tigh drop fam...........sum hairy bits but drop was tight overall 8.7/10 Peace

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finnaly....thanks fam...bring some feed back!!!!!!

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uppin for some votes.............................

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nice spit kid. nice floe. keep it up. peace