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Old 09-24-05, 04:10 AM   #1
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Squad Bangaz Ft. Olivia - We Gangsta

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We back with a new track...we took Yayo's "We Don't Give A Fuck" beat from his album...left Olivia on the hook and did our thing...20 grand on the first verse...Vendetta (me) on the second verse...and S-large on the third verse...check it out

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209394
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209208
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208938


http://www.soundclick.com/vendettaakacenario

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Old 09-24-05, 08:56 AM   #2
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beat is sick as hell... chorus is obviously dope

flow is dope... you ride this beat real well
delivery is cool... your kinda unclear at some points, maybe it's your mic cuz it's only in certain points so i don't wanna say your enunciation needs work, maybe it's just my earphones or somethin

voice is cool, track concept isn't very original, but it's cool anyway

lyrics were pretty nice, the shoes/bozo line stuck out to me



overall nice track 8.6/10
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Old 09-24-05, 01:52 PM   #3
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aiight intro- w/ the adlibs and the girl in the background warmin up- nice... sounds like its gon' be high energy-- hook is pretty good, good production on it... first cat sound alot like cam... second cat alot like banks... third cat a lil g-unish also... im sayin, u put it together right, I just think yall could go further with more of your own styles... kinda just sounded like yall each picked a rapper and ran with his style- but keep doin ya thing. 1
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Old 09-24-05, 04:47 PM   #4
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Old 09-24-05, 04:49 PM   #5
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Yo Fam I Like The Beat On This Shit Yep Sick As Hell..And The Flow Was Nice As Hell Delivery Was Great Man..You Be Killing Them Tracks Home Boy..Keep This Up Man Yall Drop Tracks Liek Crazy Squad Bangers Lol...Dope Name Man For Sure.
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Old 09-24-05, 10:19 PM   #6
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yo we all wrote, recorded, mixed and mastered this track in 20 mins. no lie
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Old 09-25-05, 02:56 PM   #7
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Old 09-25-05, 03:36 PM   #8
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think u could send me the hook n instrumental?......yea this track is dope....nice verses
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i'll have to say no due to the lack of feedback u left
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Old 09-25-05, 04:16 PM   #10
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Im really feelin the beat no doubt, hook obviously really good, likin the flow, delivery on and off really, most bits very good, keep doin you im likin youre style....2nd guy...likin you tooo, decent flow, delivery good throughout, and 3rd guy decent flow.....delivery on and off keep doin you...imma come back with a link to rtf is that koo
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Old 09-26-05, 03:44 AM   #11
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Old 09-26-05, 03:59 PM   #12
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Old 10-02-05, 04:23 AM   #13
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damn yoo.. dat gurl got skills same as you nigga....

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