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Old 01-23-06, 02:04 PM   #1
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Old 01-24-06, 12:41 AM   #2
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ill leave feed on this tommorow
vote for two featured tracks for next week
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Old 01-24-06, 01:12 PM   #3
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vocals kinda loud, better pronounciation throughout would help because I have to replay most of your bars to really get into it and know what you sayin. I like the rowdy talk shit vibe of it, delivery is solid, you definately feelin yourself- just work on the pronounciation and quality aspects and you got it... keep droppin
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Old 01-24-06, 02:44 PM   #4
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Thanks..This Was A Quick Track To Finish A task I Was Set Lol
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Old 01-25-06, 11:18 AM   #5
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beat is hard i like it...I could understand u pretty good but yeah u may wanna work on that...the part where u drop the beat u should drop it again right after that when u drop the punch i think it would sound ill...real short but hey...lyrically this really isnt anything amazing...dope like crack line is played...
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