www.soundclick.com/paranoid05

1st verse: Paranoid
Hook: Paranoid
2nd verse: Snypa
3rd verse: Prozak

I'll post links up later...and remember to leave links when you drop feed.

Enjoy.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629831
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2629817

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listning.......................................... .......

beat coo.............................................

flows off and on.....................................

delieveryz lackin too..................................

lyircs r cool..........................................

qualityz ight..........................................
hooks plain but ight

snypas verse

falls off at first(sound like u spittin to fast)

deleivetys ight.....................

emotions good.............................

pressence is ok

hook again blahhhhhhhhh

prozac...................................

flows off....................................

delieveryz off..........................

lyrics r ight(lol at tha names)

emotions gettin better..................
pressence is gettin better

alot could of been worked on in this it was ight i guess.....................................
but lacked tha thingz i said keep droppin and ill leave a link innna min

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ill drop feed later tonight or tommorow after noon

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i dont see the track on there?

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yea me either?.

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It should appear....hmmmm....weird...thanx for tha feed Trakk

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haaa...was funny lookin at mario dance while this beat played

1st cat needs better EQ levels on the vocals...kinda muffled...up the highs


flow is decent...kinda mechanical


the hook?...not mixed well at all...needs a "chorus" effect on it


2nd cat...better EQ levels

flow is decent

**liked the echo effect in there


lyrical, this was adequate on both parts, but nothing special


decent drop fellas

P.S. wasn't feelin prozak
1

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

thanks for the feed bro

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stop tryna be Canada's Finest when u know i am^ haha

ok i see the track now,

paranoid- flows decent, deliverys ok, mic presence needs to be worked on. emotion iiight, also could use work.
Snypa- flows ok, emotions iiiight, deliverys coo, mic presence is coo, lyrics r decent..coo verse
Prozak- flows horrible lol..dont think he was on the beat AT ALL lol..and thats all ima say cause i dont wanna trash talk the dood..
hook- eh, im not really feelin the flow or lyrics.. shud be more catchy.

decent track, keep practicin, n droppin

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...103#post2632103
holla back^^^^


Feed used 1/24/06 "Hold That"

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Ill feed just paranoid.

this tracks ok, emtion could be a bit better, sound robotic kinda. Beats meh.reasonable track.

why would u only leave feed for paranoid?

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^he's in love with me, that's why. but snypa stop posting k, let the people post their thoughts on it k.

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Paranoid - You had a ok flow, you used some ok rhymes, you didnt come as good as I thought you would though. 6/10

Snypa - I liked your verse the best, flow was iight, you had some good lyircs I was feelin' ya rhymes. 7.5/10

Prozak - You had a ok startin' but after that it was borin' and lame, you need to up ya game. 3/10

OVERALL TRACK - 5/10 was a pretty good track, keep it up snypa and para.

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

beat i dont really like it but its not horrid
para voice is cool delivery is ok nothing special but has def improved flow is on for the mos part but sounds like robotic lol lyrics were good
hook not feeling it to be honest
2nd guy lyrics were good flow was pretty good presence was ok could use a litle improvement
3rd guy bad voice bad flow ok lyrics not feeling them you need improvement

overall 5.5/10

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