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07-10-02, 01:41 PM | #1 | ||||||
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i cant
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i cant let what you do destroy me take over me..
i cant let the pain fry my brain having me going insane to the point that i cant remain... real.. real to myself to you or i but fuck it only the strong survive.. i cant let you make me feel selfless, hopeless, lifeless leaving me breathless.. having to gasp for air with all the fog of misery leaving me in despair.. i cant let you destroy what i amounted to be , the queen the righteous one.. the one that stayed strong through all the beatings,,no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up.. i cant let you take me down under where there is no sunshine but your yells and anger that roar like thunder.. i cant let you take the best of me.. i cant and wont let you kill me.. |
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07-11-02, 11:24 AM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
uppin ^^^
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07-11-02, 12:00 PM | #3 | ||||||
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Tight ish gurl ...
sorrry bout the sleepers!! Much props pz xXx DiMe ~1~ |
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07-11-02, 12:32 PM | #4 | |||||||
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That line was SoO-sO good Ma..Really summed up the vibe of the whole verse..You just pop up when im least expectin it...its good to see ya back gyrl...you have definately elevated since last i read from you..This verse was mad nice..Ive always been feelin ya shit..im lookin forward to seein more from ya ma....stay up n stick around.. peace. |
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07-11-02, 02:50 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
wrd crazy sleepers....
thanks for tha love yall... uno star |
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07-11-02, 02:57 PM | #6 | ||||||
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pure strong emotions...structure was a bit off...but still came very raw....very powerful....i felt it for sure...nice to see you're 'moving on'...stay strong...keep yo head up...(sorry if i sound patronising)...respect....
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07-11-02, 02:57 PM | #7 | ||||||
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this was deep as whoa!! i like the use of "i cant" nice flow!
deepish on the real! holla atcha boi! and check out some of my drops! |
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07-12-02, 09:32 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
no doubt..luv thanks for da points...
respect uno |
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07-12-02, 01:14 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: 1636 8BC9
i was feelin dis. i like da internal rhyme. ur styles a bit different from most i seen and i like it. keep it up. one
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07-13-02, 12:07 PM | #10 | ||||||
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no doubt ma,,
much respect uno |
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07-13-02, 12:20 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Yo stay righteous. Stay true sis. Keep God first. Only love.
Much love and God Bless you.. |
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07-15-02, 07:40 AM | #12 | ||||||
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wrd up ^^
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