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Old 07-10-02, 01:41 PM   #1
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i cant

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i cant let what you do destroy me take over me..
i cant let the pain fry my brain having me going insane to the point that i cant remain...
real.. real to myself to you or i but fuck it only the strong survive..
i cant let you make me feel selfless, hopeless, lifeless leaving me breathless.. having to gasp for air with all the fog of misery leaving me in despair..

i cant let you destroy what i amounted to be , the queen the righteous one.. the one that stayed strong through all the beatings,,no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..

i cant let you take me down under where there is no sunshine but your yells and anger that roar like thunder..


i cant let you take the best of me.. i cant and wont let you kill me..
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Old 07-11-02, 11:24 AM   #2
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uppin ^^^
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Old 07-11-02, 12:00 PM   #3
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Tight ish gurl ...
sorrry bout the sleepers!!

Much props

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Old 07-11-02, 12:32 PM   #4
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Re: i cant

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no matter how many time i fell i got up,,no matter how many times i failed i grew up..


That line was SoO-sO good Ma..Really summed up the vibe of the whole verse..You just pop up when im least expectin it...its good to see ya back gyrl...you have definately elevated since last i read from you..This verse was mad nice..Ive always been feelin ya shit..im lookin forward to seein more from ya ma....stay up n stick around..
peace.
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Old 07-11-02, 02:50 PM   #5
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wrd crazy sleepers....

thanks for tha love yall...

uno

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Old 07-11-02, 02:57 PM   #6
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pure strong emotions...structure was a bit off...but still came very raw....very powerful....i felt it for sure...nice to see you're 'moving on'...stay strong...keep yo head up...(sorry if i sound patronising)...respect....
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Old 07-11-02, 02:57 PM   #7
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this was deep as whoa!! i like the use of "i cant" nice flow!

deepish on the real!

holla atcha boi!

and check out some of my drops!
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Old 07-12-02, 09:32 AM   #8
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no doubt..luv thanks for da points...

respect

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Old 07-12-02, 01:14 PM   #9
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i was feelin dis. i like da internal rhyme. ur styles a bit different from most i seen and i like it. keep it up. one
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Old 07-13-02, 12:07 PM   #10
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no doubt ma,,

much respect
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Old 07-13-02, 12:20 PM   #11
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Yo stay righteous. Stay true sis. Keep God first. Only love.

Much love and God Bless you..
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Old 07-15-02, 07:40 AM   #12
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wrd up ^^
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