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Old 05-21-06, 06:31 AM   #1
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Konvict feat. SenseR - My Swagger ********HOTT*******

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alota yall heard the older version this is the one going on the mixtape what u know about that
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Old 05-21-06, 06:46 AM   #2
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Old 05-21-06, 09:26 AM   #3
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Uppin...............
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Old 05-21-06, 12:46 PM   #4
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beat is pretty cool
alot of cool lines pretty good verse lyrically your definately improving with your lisp not nearly as noticable as it has been on other tracks
emotion is cool
flow was cool
was there a hook?????
sensers flwo is on point is pretty cool voice is cool
with your delivery you sound like youre trying to be like triple n in my opinion lol
lyrics were cool quality was good better than jaes
overall track is most def downloadable

only complaint would be i cnat hear some of jaes verse because the beat overpowers him in parts
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Old 05-21-06, 04:06 PM   #5
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thanks uppin..........
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Old 05-24-06, 06:23 PM   #6
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ok ok, first track I heard you collabin with senser. Nice beat choice fa sure. Your prounceation is a lot better Kon. The flow is nice and smooth, nothin changed about it though. The lyrics was pretty gangsta though, but you also kept it real man. The delivery is gettin there man. And for senser shit man you've changed a lot, you had a very different flow on this one. Your delivery has changed too. The emotion was on lock like always, you always sound mean. your verse was mad short though, instead of just yellin after Kon's verse you shoulda just spat after him but it's still good.

nice track yall.
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Old 05-25-06, 12:02 AM   #7
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more mixing man...your lisp came back a lil, you can fix it with turning down your highs.....
lyrics were nice tho...
willa said it, you need a hook.....
i dunno sensar sounds on point...i aint gon go that deep in it, cuz you prolly only wunna know bout u....
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Old 05-25-06, 08:54 AM   #8
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aright m8 i was thinking of sticking round a bit
but then i looked at the text section

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