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Old 07-03-05, 12:48 AM   #1
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NEW SPUL!!!! ft. Triple_N "Caught Up"

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aiight some new shit I did wit triple.

I left feed on Triple_N and Senser's Dem Thangs, and SenseRs 20 Grand diss.

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my quality sound fucked cuz I gotta fix shit, but it'll have to do.

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intro: Triple_N/SPuL
1st verse:SPuL
2nd verse: Trip
Outro: trip


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Old 07-03-05, 01:00 AM   #2
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i really like the version by s.i n senser and this one really went hot who is this song normally by?
anyway spul you did a good job i can see elevation, good flow nice emotion good tone of the vocals everything was goin good and flowin good nice job.
triple you did somin a lot different then i would expected, but yea elevation comes once you try different things. good emotion nice flow nice smooth tone but i really can see you doin better on a beat like this.
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Old 07-03-05, 01:05 AM   #3
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diggin' this guys...both ya'll flow is on point, picked a good song Lloyd on the hook was nyce...never heard the original before...

but yeah, this is a hott lil' banger ya'll got here guys...do da damn thang...
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Old 07-03-05, 01:09 AM   #4
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hmmm...
personally ive never liked this beat, but w/e...
good job keeping the hook, it would've been a complete disaster had you or trip attempted to sing the hook...lmao

spul, your verse was tight
coo flow, nice lyrics
were you tallkin bout B then? better not be...
lmao but nah nice verse yo

trip, you shit was hot as well
great flow, i loved your delivery on this shit too...shit was great
outro is kinda coo too
nice shit all around

both you did pretty good
shit wasnt AMAZING but it was good...
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Old 07-03-05, 01:13 AM   #5
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Spul: Niiiice. You just keep elevatin. Flow was on point, lyrics were cool. Everything was mint, you just gotta up your emotion a little. It wasnt bad, but you werent as into it as you should have been. That was the only flaw I heard.

triple: FIRE. I'm real sorry but I cant even give constructive feed on ya shit. Just keep doing ya thing... You on a higher level than everyone on this site.
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Old 07-03-05, 01:49 AM   #6
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Intro: Sounded nice and pro, the chick singing was a real nice edition..

First verse: Spul youve improved, this actually wasnt bad man.. Your flow is starting to sound nice and pro.. Propers for that man..

Triple-- sounds nice as usual, you def got a future in rap..

I actually dont have much critasism at all for this track, was feeling it what can I say..
Good work peeps, def above the regular standard for net emcees..
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Old 07-03-05, 04:51 AM   #7
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I heard this one T sended to me on aim...when S wusnt online....

Spuly u came hella nice on this no joke am serious, flow was nice...

like i said to Triplenizzle

His voice fitted the beat, it was laid back...he wusnt hyper as his ussual well collab
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Old 07-03-05, 07:06 AM   #8
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Nice remix right here, I'll break it down...

SPuL: you just keep on improving, you working hard to elevate and the work is definitely paying off cause anyone can notice how you gotten better. Feeling your flow, lyrics were good, delivery was cool for sure. Hope to see even more of this, looking forward to your next joint

Triple N: another solid verse by you, we gettin used to you dropping fire and ya just keep on going. Flow was nice, delivery was good, it's something different you tried here and it sure as hell worked out nicely. Keep it up man!
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Old 07-03-05, 11:54 AM   #9
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aiight thanks to everyone for feed. appreciate it. props to that. And yea, I agree I could have upped the emotion. Prolly gonna redo my verse cuz the quality was a lil fucked up, and prolly improve emotion. but thanks to all for leavin' feed. up.......
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Old 07-03-05, 02:39 PM   #10
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Old 07-03-05, 03:46 PM   #11
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Old 07-03-05, 03:52 PM   #12
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Shit was coo' but fo real ya quality needs 2 be upped....
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Old 07-03-05, 03:55 PM   #13
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spul: as always man you be gettin better by everysong you make.. ur quality aint as bad as you sed it?? well i heard this before it was even posted up.. and i actually listend to this song alot.. your voice is really going smooth with the beat.. and thats good.. that shows your using different delivery with everyone new song you make.. its good to have different delivery with everysong you make because it helps ppl not loose interest n elevates u even more..

Trip... well u know wut i think man lol.. but well theres really nothing to say to you to up your skills.. your already the best in the site.. all i could say for you is keep it up and keep surprising us with these amazing skillz of yours..

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Old 07-03-05, 04:06 PM   #14
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^thanks appreciate feedback man. uppin'.............
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