10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no feedin
etc etc

good luck

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Gay white poeple

Prepare for constipation, Imma shit this thug..who
You aint ill menolin, your a fucking perscription drug!
But saying that..Imma bout to go off on a tange...
Props to I.C.U. Unit...for being my number1 fan!
But back to business...When meno spits its a joke
Cuz seriously duke, ICU comes with nicer posts!
I could make you sit, with my ass standing up..
Change ya name to bitchilin, you aint meno nuff!
I'm that funny type, with jokes make ya speechless
But if I cracked a joke now, You'd be in 2 pieces!

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i went out, an im back now,
i never thought you'd spit, im soryy keyin up at
00:13 U,K time


you name is one of those... a lot farther from the truth,
hitting this kid up so muc, i oughta be called babe ruth,
you declare illness (sig) feels like im battling the infantry disease,
you got all your rehearsed shit wrong, like nervous interviewees,
your already winning 1-0. no need for the mod to re-set the polls,
even when i come half assed.. you make my verse look whole,
you belong in dynasty soldiers, you should be with your own kind,
if it wernt for people like you... herb would still be undefined,
well my quick keys rip up your flesh... break you bones,
now run away little piggy, menolin just had you owned,

00:34

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RB-ya came w/ some very original punches I was well impressed
w/ ya play off Menolin n all. the Meno Nuff line was funny &
I liked ya finisher a lot to. Flow was on point. this was an above
average verse.
Yet I dunny know why ya w/ Dynasty Soldiers lmao

Menolin-Some punches was nice but this was too much filler
The babe Ruth line wasnt good coz it dint hit. But I did like
the Vers look Whole line. that was prob ya best punch
Flow was choppy but wasnt too bad. Underestimated Him tho.

V/RB.com's....For being a lot more Wittier

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are you taking the piss??

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lmao...thanks for the vote mayne....i gotta start somewhere

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well uppin first time
peace

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cmon and vote yall...
I'll return the favor....

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aight i think that rb's father got this

rb's- good punches very witty indeed
nice verse
flow was good structure was good
opener was funny clser was good
good verse
7-10

menolin- an ok verse
i felt u underestimated him
ok punches
flow was ok
and as bi sed a lot of filler
6.5-10

for better punches and harder hitting punches

v/rb's father

hit up the battles in my sig and then i will come back and poll vote

RB.com's Father wins cus his was funnier
since i rated yours come and rate mine

B.I Detained with the hate vote
i doubt the other 2 actually read the battle, they just followed BI detained's vote!!!




some real votes please!!

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I'll vote wen u follow the links i left in ya other battles..

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wot the fuck. Menolin we are arent we?
stop being a bitch..RB was witty..yours
wasnt. He came w/ sum iight concepts.
you didnt. C'mon!! the Babe Ruth line
summed up ya verse

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