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01-06-05, 05:07 AM | #1 | |||||
(X) CeEding all Expectations
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Insanity- posted orignally in try outs by (X) CeEd
IP: 5A50 DAC7
I was nervous, scared one day it would come true and i would loose insanity
loosin' myself my mind flew away but radically i tried 2 come back 2 reality. all the times i sat in the front yard wonderin' what would happen to me. after seein' what i saw......my friends death was just to hard to bare, and see he got shot in the left side in his heart...and that left me on a Nervous Break I tried explainin' to people in the hospital how i felt it wuz hard to relate!!!! They said i needed time off work needed to relax and have a good holiday I slowly lost touch wit' my sanity and obessed over the thoughts i made... I was slowly moved to "THE INSTITUTION OF PSCHOLOGY"in Victoria After staying there for 8 long months i grew to know i had all sorts of Phobia's lookin' every day at the night sky i would wonder,when would i get of my feet Everyday someone would wnna fight me, for who i was, i really needed Relief I would hold my breath till the day came,till the label "SANE", was labelled and i would finally remember my name....but till then my mind closed to Fatal, And now i am standin' all alone in the Balcony hopin' this is all Superfical.... uppin 4 feed back
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01-06-05, 05:08 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
uppin 4 some good feedback homies.............................
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01-06-05, 06:33 PM | #3 | |||||
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ppl some fukin feed back here,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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01-06-05, 06:54 PM | #4 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: 9A80 AF2E
the rhyming feel a little off and the scructure wasn't perfect but i still liked it
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01-06-05, 07:00 PM | #5 | |||||
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thnx homie^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ uooin this shit........
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01-06-05, 09:43 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: 5A50 DAC7
uppinthis plese ppl vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
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