|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
03-29-09, 04:12 AM
|
#1
|
||||||
|
Above Originality
|
Coke Dealer (2-1) Vs. JTR (2-1)
IP: 2A16 40FA
Checkin in Wednesday Midnight Pacific. Drop by Friday Midnight Pacific. Voting ends Sunday Midnight Pacific. Topics MUST HAVE 3 LINKS IN CHECK-IN And one must be on either the champ Or the contender match.
__________________
Chryme Syndicate
-Chalkin' Up Your Future Last edited by Mr.Write : 03-29-09 at 04:19 PM. |
||||||
 
|
|
|
03-29-09, 03:57 PM
|
#2
|
||||
|
Jack The Ripper
|
IP: F540 07B2
lol @ me not being in the champ match, I posted a day late in a battle that stayed up for an extra week after I posted
wowwww
__________________
It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... |
||||
|
|
|
03-29-09, 04:18 PM
|
#3
|
||||||
|
Above Originality
|
IP: 2A16 40FA
sorry Entity took the DQ win...and batlles stayed an extra week open due to a one week layoff.
__________________
Chryme Syndicate
-Chalkin' Up Your Future |
||||||
|
|
|
|
03-29-09, 07:19 PM
|
#4
|
||||||||
|
Pushin it....
|
IP: C019 9845
haven't i already battled you enough, jesus christ
__________________
Quote:
  Destroyin Tricks on the Daily   |
||||||||
|
|
|
03-30-09, 06:55 PM
|
#5
|
||||||||
|
Pushin it....
|
IP: C019 9845
I Believe It was a fluke, where's the truth, i can't really understand what i'm seeing These white lies tell my eyes that they conicide with what i believe in Its demeaning, how i feel inside, watch as i hide, the hurt in my life Untouchable, such as those, who i've seen blinded by that same light Who's right? when they say were wrong? who's wrong when their gone? Am i alone in this believe, my feelings just leap, at a chance they preach What i feel is right that i seek, whos to know the outcome is bleek Am i the tough guy or a geek? Only they can decide in what i belive in The constant reminders, those telling us can blind us, from how we feel deep down Dont sound so filled with sorrow, but where's tommorow, when tonight no ones around 'cuz, what am i too belive in?' Do we stead fast or change the task, who's to tell me waht to do? Who do we trust, i pray that we must have answer to all things true Do we pray for just or fight becuase we must, why turn my ahead away The answers are untouched or are they unjust when the right decide not to stay Is it a political matter or does politic's even matter when our children can't play Is Obama a Bush, or do we shush a comman things away that we say? Are the words to abstarct, or are we at that point that no one understands Or are we to belivie that our seed has no choice by their own hands? Should we stand tall or watch as we fall, this world is complicated place Regardless of who's retard, we are all in the same boat today Sink or swim, or is it the water we hope to wash away are passed sorrows Our life's going down, no ones around so dont even think you can barrow A padded life, a lovely wife, these things are projected that we must take them But by who's concern, is what you learn, really just preached by the condem I question and ponder what really is longer...life its self or the belivie i listen again 'so what do i belivie in....'
__________________
Quote:
Destroyin Tricks on the Daily |
||||||||
|
|
|
03-31-09, 01:25 AM
|
#6
|
||||
|
Jack The Ripper
|
IP: F540 07B2
Shower Dirty
The door creeks open, she seems focused on getting all clean But the soap is hopeless when she’s going to get in with me Kisses down the back of her neck to her jeans; I slowly unbutton them Hips: I’m holding and hugging them, then slowly start rubbing them Playful and listens to words as I’m groping her chest. Shea lotion waiting My angel, I lift up her shirt over her head like her halo’s location Press up against her butt; keep her close as my dick flops on her cheeks Panties down her long legs; thong between her toes like flipflops on the beach A round small ass, she’s all that. Thoughts just linger to the vision of screwin Kissing & fooling around, her bra snaps off like fingers to the rhythm of music Perfect from her head to the back of her feet. Nervous, she’s laughing at me Passionately teasing. This peace is like paradise; we feel like Adam and Eve But subtracting the leaves that would cover my lovers brown golden skin I kiss her as I hold her chin, then pull the curtains back to let the show begin The shower starts off cold as shit, she cowers to the warmth of my arms The water heats up but doesn’t compare to that of the warmth of her heart Massage her body, sculpted like she takin palates. My hotty's the flyest thing Fine as string on violins and sings beautifully as we’re washing with Irish spring Can't find a thing wrong with her. Hips rock, I talk to her it makes me get hard Cock rises like mercury in thermometers, shower lasts as long as her legs are Steam rises, screams quiet: she got fucked harder then me last week vs. NT My chicks pretty with the best feats. It’s silly, we get dirty as we get clean My love, the one who acts in the shower flirty My girl, my world, I love how we shower dirty
__________________
It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... Last edited by Farnsworth : 04-02-09 at 12:40 AM. |
||||
|
|
|
04-01-09, 09:04 PM
|
#7
|
||||||||
|
Pushin it....
|
IP: C019 9845
come on J, post up
__________________
Quote:
Destroyin Tricks on the Daily |
||||||||
|
|
|
04-01-09, 09:42 PM
|
#8
|
||||
|
Jack The Ripper
|
IP: F540 07B2
shut up hoe lol
__________________
It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... |
||||
|
|
|
04-02-09, 12:10 PM
|
#9
|
||||||||
|
Pushin it....
|
IP: C019 9845
rofl uppin for votes
__________________
Quote:
Destroyin Tricks on the Daily |
||||||||
|
|
|
04-04-09, 09:35 PM
|
#10
|
||||||
|
Above Originality
|
IP: A57E 827A
ok this was anice decent battle from both guys man so props on that....loved the different approaches.
JTR Flow- was on point and i liked how it stayed in a nice rhytmn. it didnt get off tune or what not with shit man and it was nicely done with ease. it had a nice bounce to it dude... and i liked the content within the written. Story- was a nice touch aswell something like a text self glory and what not nah mean... but it was still a nice touch. COKE Flow- was kind of choppy and drifted off key a tad bit sorry to say but it picked up later on dude and so props on that shit nah mean. Story- dude was a nice fuckin illy touch man... i think your story was the better out of the two. the first approach was more political and economic wise and the other was a great tease and what not but i have to go with JTR for more creative reasons on his lines great job guys thanks for droppin by the way
__________________
Chryme Syndicate
-Chalkin' Up Your Future |
||||||
|
|
|
|
04-05-09, 06:46 AM
|
#11
|
||||||
|
Herb
|
IP: 4556 7CE7
Coke- Reckon you should run a spell check over your next piece mate. This was a ramble type piece, the narrator talking through his state of confusion. I reckon you could've got more creative with the topic and built up the imagery more. Structurally it was fine though.
JTR- Best verse i read all week, Good take on the topic, nothing wrong with some porno writing, lol. Clear imagery, good vocab choice, funny punchline about your last battle. Fuck it, it was all there wrapped up in a nice little topical package. Vote- JTR, stronger verse all round. |
||||||
|
|
|
04-05-09, 07:09 AM
|
#12
|
|||
|
Skadoosh!
|
IP: 2BA6 1F0F
Lmao.
I'd vote for Josh just for that shot at NT.
__________________
 |
|||
|
|
|
|
04-05-09, 11:57 AM
|
#13
|
|||||
|
Maggot
|
IP: 1356 B750
Vote: Coke..solely cause you ripped on me in your verse
lmao, some much for this kid not caring...it was last week and hes still bitchin about it... Look Jackie farnsworth whatever your name is...if you really, really want that tally in your record, go ahead and take it honestly its a topical league that you apparently care so much about so go ahead, next time ill just give you an extra day so you don't have to let me know since thats such a pain i the ass...alright thats all I have to say about that now, I just wanted to put that out there, whatever now.. ...I liked cokes drop better....
__________________
Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief... Last edited by N†T : 04-05-09 at 12:02 PM. |
|||||
|
|
|
04-05-09, 12:24 PM
|
#14
|
||||
|
Jack The Ripper
|
IP: F540 07B2
Are you serious? It was a fucking JOKE dude, it was put there to give some comedic feel, I put it in cuz I thought it'd be funny
And oh, sure enough, people ended up finding it funny, just read the votes and you'll see what they had to say about it  So how about you shut the fuck up and get a sense of humor
__________________
It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... |
||||
|
|
|
04-05-09, 05:22 PM
|
#15
|
|||||
|
Maggot
|
IP: 1356 B750
i did shut the fuck up, it was funny but you still ripped on me lol
its alright ill try to think of somthin to put in my drop next week for you...
__________________
Although these words, DIG, DEEP
They offer no relief... |
|||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
