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11-16-05, 12:55 AM
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"The West" Feat. Speats...Dope Collab...
IP: DB16 D9CD
www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...just threw this together tonight. It's actually a pretty good collab...word, peep and we'll return favors. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214374 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214296 |
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11-16-05, 01:23 AM
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Ike
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IP: 7629 2214
listening...damn u dropping tracks like hell....lol
beat is pretty good..kinda got an old western feel to it... speats comes in... seems like your rushing a couple of your words...one part on your over dubs...its too loud..and makes a bad noise..or it could just be my computer.... the hiss on the hook is kinda bad...i cant really understand what your saying that much...id try to clear that up a lil... like i said in my other feed...kinda seems hesitant in the flow...but this one isnt as bad...its a lot more smooth...but u still gotta work on that..some of your overdubs are off....try to get them on...they can make the track that much better.... overall.....not a bad track....keep it up....and please rtf on mine and black magiks songs called Gotta Keep Ya Head Up thanks
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11-16-05, 07:50 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 3D49 422E
dopeee its my first time listenin lol, pretty good, now open
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11-16-05, 01:18 PM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FEA7 665B
LOL AT U USING THIS BEAT I USED...
Ok Checkin Speats u come in Lyrics are nice Emotion-Could Be Upped A Lil Delivery-Its Koo..... Presence-Is Good Seem To Be Confident Hook: Nice A Lil Loud I Think V2:Word Lyrics Are Nice Emotion-Is Good Delivery-Dope Presence-Good Just Lower Your Vocals A lIl Overall-8/10 Keep It Up  Lol @ U Using The Beat Me N Inter Used Like 3 Days Ago Though Word Its A Dope Beat Nice Song
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11-16-05, 01:29 PM
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You Cant Handle The Truth
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IP: 950F 0FDD
Speats the beat's nyce dude ya verse and quality were nyce too...flow needs work but not the worst I've heard L.E. ya quality is booty, heard every motion of your tongue damn near lol...verse was aiight but your emotion didn't fit, should've been more laid back on this beat duke... i.e. you really shouldn't be wasting money on a VIP account, get a mic 
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11-16-05, 04:45 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F4CA 1A66
uppiinnnn......
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11-16-05, 05:02 PM
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One Mic
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IP: BB77 E4BA
werrddd, im feelin this. this is a devize beat aint it, its pretty hot. speats you spit a gud verse here flow seemed to stay on, maybe a bit too loud at times, but overall a decent verse. LE, i was really likin' your verse, really creative wit ya rhymes, your voice kinda sounded like louis logic in this dunno y lol. decent track overall 8.5/10
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11-16-05, 05:07 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: F4CA 1A66
doppeee thanks uppin
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11-16-05, 10:45 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 40C5 B42C
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11-17-05, 07:49 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 7F42 B9C4
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11-17-05, 02:56 PM
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IP: 96F2 DF03
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da break down first guy you need way more emotion sounds like you readin the shit just up you delivery and make it flow better kinda seems like it was hard for you to rap it chorus... hisss sux my ass l.e. good shit you need to work on delivery thelyrics where dope but the way they were put together just didnt stand out to me
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11-17-05, 04:47 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: CCC3 7196
iight thanks man
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11-17-05, 09:04 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: BA87 A0AC
word shits madd loud, lol.
but word beats kidna coo, it do have a western spanish feel, which i like. i take it speats spit first actually first i heard from you... lyrically you pretty decent, you need to work on flow though theres a few times you fall off, you could easily fix those.... delivery aint bad, emotion isnt either...they could be upped a tad not too shabby though LE you pretty decent too your vocals is MADDDD loud though, hurt my ears dude, lmao. but uhh lyrically you pretty coo, i liked some of those lines a lot flow wise you avergae, dont see nuttin to set you aside from the pack but that aint a bad thing really.. emotion/delivery you real solid.. overall you pretty solid, id just work on flow a tad bit, try and make it a lil more creative i unno.. hook is ehh LE you got some weird ass effect on the lyrics that makes me not understand tha shit at all id take that off and it might be coo but work track is aight, yall both pretty decent. word hit me back yo
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11-17-05, 10:46 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 13FF 9487
¸thanks tizzy
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11-17-05, 11:50 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 5285 DC82
emotion needs to be upped... quality is ok..flow is off at some points but ok thru out other parts.
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