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07-26-04, 09:43 PM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Datruth29(1-0) vs. Com (1-0)
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-29-04, 07:48 AM | #2 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
ch-ch-ch-check
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07-29-04, 02:55 PM | #3 | ||||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 456D 2E0B
com wins although he checked in late the other dude didnt even hceck in
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07-29-04, 05:43 PM | #4 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
?? word..
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07-29-04, 06:06 PM | #5 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
yup^^^
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07-29-04, 06:12 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
Since He Checked In Late, We Both Should Just Battle.. Check
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07-29-04, 06:25 PM | #7 | ||||
Dope.
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IP: 2B92 F022
Vote COM Datruth29 naughty naughty yes you are late..
pz.
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07-29-04, 06:26 PM | #8 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
this will now become a punchline battle...both do you verses now....!!!!
both checked in late so both best write NOW
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07-29-04, 06:26 PM | #9 | |||||||
The Light
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IP: 5104 E24D
they still gotta battle.. both checked in late.. late is late
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07-29-04, 06:27 PM | #10 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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IP: 106D 7BEF
I'll Pm them JPoll Look in the Beef thread
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07-29-04, 06:32 PM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: E198 D20B
I'm about to merk this bitch."COM", just Watch him get Dissed On
Coz when I get "Pissed Off", bitches like him gets "Pissed On" |
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07-30-04, 04:18 AM | #12 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
When I drop personal on this bitch.. the fag hits tha roof
No need to get proof........coz com always drops datruth |
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07-30-04, 09:03 AM | #13 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
ok pretty decent battle:
DaTruth: Opener: I'm about to merk this bitch."COM", just Watch him get Dissed On %^meh. Pretty decent don't got no punch. But pretty tight. Closer: Coz when I get "Pissed Off", bitches like him gets "Pissed On" ^ sick shit. Rhymed wit yo opener too. good job on flow too. COM: Opener: When I drop personal on this bitch.. the fag hits tha roof ^blah. ok Closer: No need to get proof........coz com always drops datruth ^pretty good. Not as good as DaTruth though DaThruth had better verse, even though it was 2 lines, so I give it to him. Weak ass VERSES though. I expect more than 2 liens for a verse. |
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07-30-04, 09:42 AM | #14 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
^are you a fuckin moron?? they asked us to drop a punch each... so thats why we did... and his was weak as fuck.. you know nuthin,,, you cant mark a bar seperately... the "opener" as you put it, is the SETUP... the SETUP must run in conjunction with the PUNCHLINE ie.. setting it up.... and how can you mark ONE LINE on flow?? flow means how well it goes with the rest of the verse/bar... so you cant possibly mark one line on flow...... someone with a brain and a knowledge of anything textual please come in and vote please..... and i dont care if you vote for the other guy... just please show me you actually know what a punch....
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07-30-04, 10:18 AM | #15 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
nah, you motherfuckin' piece of shit. Yes, that's what you are. Peeped yo shit, you suck cock motherfucker. Yea, you must be one piece of shit, if you didn't kno I was jokin' abouit iit bein' a verse. I can read you piece of shit. Don't think I'm as dumb as a wack fuck like you. And yea, I knew it was a punch. And yes, his was better. The punch flowed better, and was much better than yours. Yours was wack as fuck. I mean to basic. Fuck yours. His flowed much better, and DIDN'T have a basic rhyme scheme. So fuck you, you suck, and have a horrible day herb.
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