Voted For: Paramik

good battle both of u..paramik nice flow and good punches, i liked wordplay in ur verse pretty tight
ice pick- ur verse was good, iight punches, had some personals but the flow wasnt as good and it was harder to read

And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow…
Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show.
^best bar in paramiks verse, good wordplay and play on his name

not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me
yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy
^best bar in icepicks verse..good multis and punch

overall paramik had the better verse..no hate to ice pick

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik has this one!!!.... he had better flow and harder punches... i liked your lyrics too....

Ice Pick.... you had good flow and some nice punches ..... but paramik came harder

rETURN THA FAVA!!!!

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Ice pick won this battle with his multies as usual. They pretty much destroyed Paramik. The actual lines themselves were stretched like a mofo tho. I dont usually like to vote on multies alone but the punches in this battle werent very desireable.
but paramki's flow was not very original i've heard most o f the punches before but ur gettin better
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Voted For: Paramik

Aight..nice verse to both Mc's hea...but my vote goes to Paramik tho...

Paramik came good in this verse..nice rhymes..decent punches...came personal liked the structure of ur verse too...

Ice Pick your verse was ok...nice punches...but (to me tho)..1 bar didn't rhyme tho...i ain't gonna say but u should kno..and ya structure lack'd...

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Voted For: Ice Pick

hey paramik arent u the one always tellin me how whack i m?
dilluted mafuka!lmao
any way its all in tha break down

paramik...
Already this bitch is thin on his ice, the way this faggot skater sways……
Ice picks flow still couldn’t be graceful if the judges’ marks were A’s.
this was ok but didnt really like the word play...

ice pick...
P's battle success?-he-fails-at-this, so watch as Ice-derails-this-b1tch
INTESIFY EFFECT BEAT him so i think its safe to say your skills is shyt!!
felt more like a set up than a opener...but damn! intensify effect?

paramik...
And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow…
Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show.
its not good when u say a niggas a no show...then he shows up n eat u

ice pick...
sayin you'll rip ICE is like sayin' broke people can afford-hummers
ßά$ïć Ţђμğãήỗmίçź ???now ur confused like 1st graders multiplyin' wit four-numbers
hot but long...but hot

paramik...
This fucking herb’s got gas in his ass but it’s the wackness that he supplied.
Knowing that this fags mostly likely to kill himself, than commit homicide.
u gotta come hardda then that...i overstood what u was tryin to say but didnt like tha content...

ice pick...
want tha truth???...ya skills is like fat-chicks...aint no one diggin'-ya rhymin'
You wouldn't be hot in a volcano in a carribean-climate livin'-inside-it!!
Pick???....i'm sicc-and-canivin', while u find dicks-to-your-likin'
das was up!........................ice pick dont get gased!

paramik...
He says he give the punches for those days, that day he felt lucky, son.
Considering that, the only days he had a punching spree, was only one.
whack.....

ice pick...
not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me
yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy
dat shit was funny... hot word play

paramik...
This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick…
Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick.
nice flow hot wordplay on his name...

ice pick...
Bottom of the 9th P and imma throw the bat at you, watch my mood ‘swing’ and you ‘catch’ my attitude….
I'll rip u and remain casual….ill make u park in ur place and the ‘Board’ walk like monopoly Avenues...
ok flow but nice wordplay

paramik...
Still fucking the penguins? This guy is all iced out, I’ll tell this guy to chill.
This bastard made Nate Dogg proud, he finally found someone he call kill.
what?........really whack...was really good...

ice pick...
Paramik get struck with injuries.. Im the storm in a distant vision ,
Once my lyrical Onslaught hits you your verse will be left in submission,
you came to this battle like a hurricane.. and blew your chances of winning
set up was coo' but da last line killed it!...

paramik...
Check in, I’ll be rummaging for Ices’ home, his location, and his house key.
Ice Pick is his own address, watch him obey me cause he’s a SERVER IP.
r u fuckin seriouse...wat a matter wit u...if dats a bar? its deffinitly not a closer...

this battle was easy...
i thought it would be better since paramik supposed to be da man n shit??? it was very disapointing ice ate u wit word play punches n content...paramiks flow was aight but dat aint gonna win it!...

paramik needs a hug...lmao
i got haze if u wanna elevate!lmao

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i guess its good i brok it down like that...theres some shady votes in here!
dis is disgusting...three niggas smokin weed wit me said ice pick won!haha
if only dat count...

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Voted For: Paramik

ok this was suppper close

and i'm not playing favorites at all

word choice//both
structure//both
word play//both
meta's//both
punches//paramik
personals//ice

so the last factor was the flow and paramiks was more on
so my vote goes to paramik

no hate to ice though ur drop was hot as hell

vote//paramik

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no doubt ice...u know i always give honest shit so dont lose...lol
paramik stop bein a bitch any nigga who checks my break down could see its an honest vote...jus cuz i dissed u dont think for a second dat i gotta fullfill some stupid need to fuck u over when u can do that on ur own...
point blank...u gassed homie...get over urself...
dont question my vote again u bitch! jus like i didnt question ur bullshit vote
but wit all da bullshit votes u acceptin: i'll kno better next time

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Voted For: Ice Pick

damn... i looked at this battle, and from ice pick's past, i was swayed towards Paramik cuz i used to think he was terrible. but ice pick proved me wrong and gets tha win...
Ice had better punchlines in this one and i liked his flow even tho it was kinda shakey.... because it would sound raw if you was battlin live, ya know... his personals about Intensity effect was good too, that was a good line.
big ups for elevatin ice...
v/ICEPICK

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