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05-05-03, 09:21 PM | #1 | ||
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I create optical illusions that puts your mind into siezures// Don't step out of line man, just follow procedure// I come in every color, different sizes and shapes// Dont mistake me for another, no disguises, dont hate// My mind is so demented I need phycollogy// im goin over bored, dont try an stop me// a kid on the brink of insanity// this fucin public likes me so much im in the new issue of vannity// they dont think im serious// my rhymes flow through my veins like cancer// they haunt me like fat haunts a dancer// no chance sir// pick you up with a lyrik and you hear it, it goes through your head with a sharp pain like an ear ache// when I flow all is at stake// put my mind on the mic and the mic just spits// everyone sittin in the crowd movin there kicks// I got many tricks, up my sleave// some to decieve and beleive// there so incredible...like hulk// the only reoson you won your first battle is cus u got ur mom too say u was dope// but you grab the mic and choke, dont do it again or ill take advantage of you like now and then...// so the next time you see element around// just remember if u grab the mic i betta hear some sound// E-CoSt302 Last edited by xXelementXx : 05-06-03 at 07:41 AM. |
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05-05-03, 09:40 PM | #2 | ||
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c'mon somone gimme some info bout this
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05-05-03, 09:52 PM | #3 | ||
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C'MON YO THE MORE REPLIES I GET THE BETTER ILL UNDERSTAND RAPPIN SO HELP ME OUT PLS HIT ME WITH SO REPLIES
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05-05-03, 10:13 PM | #4 | ||
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yo dawg that was pretty tite! kepp it up dawg
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05-05-03, 10:30 PM | #5 | |
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im feelin this dawg, the syllab was killin it foreals and rhyme structure was hitten it up. foreals but yah hit my shit up when i spit it tommorow aight ~1n~
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05-05-03, 10:44 PM | #6 | ||
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Thankz yo0o ill cheak urs out
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05-05-03, 11:28 PM | #7 | ||
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U need to expand ur vocab dawg ,, , ,,datz tha only thing which is whack about ur flow ,,,,,,,,,,
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05-06-03, 07:27 AM | #8 | ||
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iight thanx yo0o, i'll work on that~>
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05-06-03, 07:40 AM | #9 | ||
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hook me up with some feedback
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05-06-03, 09:49 AM | #10 | ||
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hott shit...feelin this...nice rhyme scheme nd sicc flow..juss needa work on that vocab..
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05-06-03, 10:14 AM | #11 | |
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tha shit was hot...it does need more vocab tho
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05-06-03, 06:37 PM | #12 | ||
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thanks yoo0o, ill work on vocab ~><~
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05-06-03, 07:51 PM | #13 | |
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...vocab....everythin else was on.....keep 2 it....peace easy
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05-06-03, 08:03 PM | #14 | |
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that shit was tight
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