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11-29-04, 08:13 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Evoloution vs. Bigchase
IP: 1C81 276B
Topic: Envy 20 lines min ...check in due Wednesday... ...Verse due Saturday... ...2 Votes due on Monday... ...Have fun good luck
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11-29-04, 08:15 PM | #2 | |||||||
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consider this my checkin....
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11-29-04, 08:36 PM | #3 | |||||
Blow Me
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check check....
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12-05-04, 04:29 PM | #4 | |||||||
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sorry my neighbors took me to BigBear...
She was my cure, she made me pure Without her my life would be a blur She's a divine creation; blessing by the Lord Our love couldn't be described with words She opened zones, her breathe my own Intimate were all the moments we spent alone Her hair so fair, skin so tender and smoothe breasts round and full, no blemishes or a bruise All her demands would suprise her that I would meet Taking comfort as I guard her body as she sleeps She hadn't learned of our passionate disposiiton She would soon desire our long forlorn traditons One night we were all alone, in our home there was a ring THere he was, chisled, tall, and yet evil's seed MY love for her beautiful body, and his evil raged Yet I couldn't stop my excitement as the slowly engaged He became me, his body my own, as I slowly mimic their actions I became one with them form my desolate spot, full of satisfaction Ahhhh the feelings of ingenuity built on top of with society I Deeply moan as pleasures of God's time with me As my deed done, my exhilation turns to rage Hes been holding me from my loved one, self imposed cage My search franticaly for his demise, an object of pain Steel to make quence my eternal thirst for limbs, his blood my rain MY screams mirrored his own, dark clouds surround our home the darkness only revealed one light her helpless groans I grabbed her soft pale hand tainting it with his blood His filth contaminated her enough , his mud on my dove I brushed her hair aside to look into her hazel eyes Her silence for minutes and the look of suprise I felt down her soft breast, lusciously with passion As my hand lowered I felt an object protruding and fastened I felt a handle, what is this object here as I looked down only the devils breath made such evil appear A knife affecting us all, death at it worst and best a sun risen in the east, clouded by the moon in west her beauty stolen from within but mine for the knife for us both now to lay as husband and wife
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12-06-04, 06:36 PM | #5 | |||||||
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no show.....damn.......sorry genocide........
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