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Old 10-16-03, 05:13 PM   #1
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Punchlines and Personals .

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Punchlines:
Well, if you do not know what one is, i suggest you find out.

To make punchlines, i think that the number one easiest way is to take popular saying or phrases...
an example of this:

& i'll Spare the kids.. but today im leaving THIS bitch raped & torn
it's not that we Hate YOU.. we just Hate that YOU WERE BORN
-evolve

the phrase "hate you were born" is a common phrase, making this a punchline. this wasnt the best example, but a good example anyway.

a standard punchline form:
this kind of punch is either just funny... or makes a comparison of two things...

example:
your verses are BlAh...i told u u're garbage no need to ignore me
y? bother 2 talk about how wack u r, when ur verses.. do it 4 me !

thats a example of a funny one.

here the comparison kind:
this ones weak, but the kind im talking about and i didnt have all day to find examples.

Your verses just stall for time like bathroom watches

stalls are in b-rooms and watches relate to time...



The separated word punchline:


this kind of punch separates a word to mean two different words, as well as the meaning of the original word...

Examples:

you can't win, u stay false to rap - & rappers stay mad at you..
cuz like distance from the equator. . its just ya L - atitude
Feeble Minded (me) vs m dizz ill.

here is the original word: Latitude. It means distance from the equator. the two different words are L (meaning loss) and attitude- (you know what this means)

"cuz like distance from the equator"
that is the meaning of the original word, put into punchline form...
punchline form uses "like" to compare two things.


Personals:
these are punchlines to the person themself. if you rip on their name its a personal.. or you can rip on something they did or said..

Examples:

Erase This Cunt, Rap Was A Phase - It's Gone, Away It Went
Seems RB Married Whack…n I'm Battlin The Termz Of Engagement
Mystery~Murdera vs termz^

he ripped on his name and did it well = good personal.
name personals are the easiest to make, but are sometimes overused.

another example:

Combined with a library of names and pages of faulty text........
There's no question why, when he seen me, he renamed Always Less!.........
taktik vs always less.

these cannot be taught.. you have to practice at them by using them in a verse. you will get used to it and find ripping on them easier.

well, i could think of more punchline forms and personals... but i dont have time right now.. hope this helps.
 
 


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