my first poem under this name but i think its good and people i have shown it to said it was good..........


.......Extinction.......

Extinction not on any animals nor plants.........................................
but on human who live life in a defensive stance..............................
on humans who decide to kill eachother, for what............................
maybe its for pain,maybe its for the hatred of our brothers................
maybe its for the mind that the human lets the devil grasp................
maybe its for that grasp that the human mind cant be freed from.......
maybe its for all the pain we absorb just to be in gods kingdom..........

Extinction to the human race even thought there is many.................
too much evil to withstand but blessing we have plenty....................
missed oppurtunites and wrong perceptions on life...........................
bad situations, lost causes all reasons for our extinction...................

Can Extinction b stoped?even tho ur alive 4 a certain amount of years?
is it better to try then to complain and shed tears?..........................

*Extinction is caused by us,the humans,and what our actions consequences are............................................... ............................
Is it better to be Extinct?or to die trying,suffering so hard?*




what yall think of that shit????feed back please

some feed back on that please.........

its pretty good... u come on some interesting topics... good job playah..

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thanks...uppin this shit....

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you nice with this

ur not betta den me but REALLY NICE lol

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keep doing these

AND OPEN MICS

that is all

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