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U spit first

U fink dat ur it, but against me u aint got a chance
Im da new kid on da block and u is in for a shock
Me name be lil jon
Im a beginer, im fresh, im cool
and by the time ur as good as me, ill av treble the ability
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
you'll see me pushin round rappin master in a pink baby carraige
his life will be as long as Britneys marriage
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
U should av felt my style, my rhymes flow like a river, im like poison flowing through ur liver
Im gunna end dis shit rit ere, rit now, im out,
iv killed dis guy, without a doubt

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"THE FRANCHISE"

These are your last words, there aint gonna be no Lil Jon sequel//
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal//
I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals//
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles//
I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it//
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid//
thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn//
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return//
your better off with your cock in your hand//
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands//
Ima school you cause my punches come in courses//
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources//
the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside//
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side

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CMON ON PPL VOTE

Lil john - strucuture is basic, flow falls off a lil, the first four lines dont rhyme at all, vocab is basic, punches dont hit that hard, no personals

Rapping master- structure is ok, flow is ok, pretty good rhyme scheme, vocab is basic, some of the punches are pretty good, some nice personals

Conclusion - rapping master takes this in flow, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote

VOTE - RAPPING MASTER

yo since i took the time to leave my opinion, id appreciate if u did the same on dis......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...910#post1073910

much appreciated.........

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Lil jon please do every1 a fava and quit rappin!
I dnt no if u hav a st st st stuter but u used 2 lines twice!

RAPPING MASTER: liked ur verse good all round i realy liked the Closer it was siik!!!!
Vote Rapping Master

if i had to vote, i would have to m=ost definitly give this to rappin master, he had the punches, the structure was decent, didn't need much personal, where as lil jon should take this personal and get his shit together, i'm not one to laugh at ppl's work, for i myself need improvement, but keep at it guys.

vote=rappin master

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shit was all good just a week ago!!

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CMON ON PPL VOTE

i aint gon write a story but i vote fo rappin master his rhymes were tight and i liked his flow......lil jon was a lil plain......so my vote is for...



VOTE- Rapping Master

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105502 Honest vote both you please



I red the first 6 lines of lil jon and said wow this is some nsync sounding shit.

Well
Open: Rapping Master Hey lil jon try something I don't less pop sounding

Punches: Rapping Master Hey lil jon study and try to compute what a punchline is you will learn after a while

Metaphors: Rapping Master Hey lil jon come I know you can do better



Fuck it man Rapping master dominated this shit by far lil jon I will not hate but you need a lot more practice

YO rapping master took this one. Yo if your looking for a crew/group dawg PM ME.

- this crew/group is mainly for people new to RB but anyone can join if their good.

HOLLA BACK.............

My vote goes to RappinMaster cuz his punches were betta and Lil Jon didnt even come hard at RappinMaster...

lil jon
U fink dat ur it, but against me u aint got a chance
Im da new kid on da block and u is in for a shock
Me name be lil jon
Im a beginer, im fresh, im cool
and by the time ur as good as me, ill av treble the ability
wack, ya structures terrible...
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
boo...
you'll see me pushin round rappin master in a pink baby carraige
his life will be as long as Britneys marriage
1st line - GAY!2nd wasnt too bad
dis guys been poppin 2 many pills
his vocal, his rhymes aint got da skills
WTF!!YOU REPEATING YASELF OLD MAN!!
U should av felt my style, my rhymes flow like a river, im like poison flowing through ur liver
played out and ya lines older then cum lines
Im gunna end dis shit rit ere, rit now, im out,
iv killed dis guy, without a doubt
you sure about that...

One decent line.... tha rest?Crap....read vets battles kid, trust me it helps, read some proverbs too, ya drop mad wordplay off it, keep elevating yo

R.M
These are your last words, there aint gonna be no Lil Jon sequel//
unlike 1 plus 1, us 2 aint equal//
lol its aight
I just robbed this win from you like lyrical criminals//
my rhymes will have you see the light like biblical miracles//
naw
I elevated to excellence, been there, done that, and past it//
I spit rhymes that'll burn your throat like Citrious Acid//
naw uppin yaself
thinkin I wont attack you is like lightin a fire and expectin it not to burn//
you checked in, thats it, now its your point of no return//
lol could of flipped harder, but its ok
your better off with your cock in your hand//
cause your just playin with yourself if you think our equality stands//
could of hit harder
Ima school you cause my punches come in courses//
I'll burn you up with more rhymes then natural resources//
naw uppin yaself, aight punch
the Freestyle God, my lyrical skill will never supside//
cause when Jesus walked on water, I raced him to the other side
lol uppin yaself again, cmon man

Some pretty good punches, uppin yaself far too much though, but ya easily when this tho

R.M

Honest votes on these please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1064515
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1060300
I'll poll soon

PiZ