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Fear

Yeah im ELECTRIC n ill send you straight to hell
but honestly kid
next time you diss me... learn how to spell
after this battle you'll be nothing just a stale fart
n yes people will say i rectum, i ripped your ass apart

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eh. weak weak here. Nothing impressive @ all.
Prolly why theres no votes yet.

Lay- Your 1st punch was a good concept. I liked the idea you was tryin to point out
But i'm not sure if thats played out on Lampejo. Yet. Your wording needs to improve though. Lengthen ya lines up, and add more content. 2nd bar, was weak.

Lamp-Dude both of ya bars were played. Very poorly worded. Concepts overall were weak as well. Rhyme scheme was ok...The learn how to spell shit/rectum are some of the most played lines in text man.


v/Lay. By a small margin. both were weak. real close to decide on this...but i had to pick 1..no hate.

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weak battle on both parts

lay fear your first punch was the best of the battle hands down.
second punch im sure you knew it wasn't that great just posted it.

lampejo I think you focused everything offof the part that allows you to feed.
Neither of your punchs where really on point to me.

v/lay fear

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Lay Fear
ya flow's eletric? I hate it n' you can comply with this
cuz I'm stompin out 'Lamp' like I'm against appliances
Very basic and elementary. Got the point across though, just gotta work on your wording.

Lampejo.
Yeah im ELECTRIC n ill send you straight to hell
but honestly kid
next time you diss me... learn how to spell
weak.
after this battle you'll be nothing just a stale fart
n yes people will say i rectum, i ripped your ass apart
Not original at all. Weak attemp.

Lay Fear
A played punch n no multi's? wait, im about to blast him hard...
his sig is evidence to bein gay, its him after he ripps a ass apart
Again, I'm not really impressed. This was decent, I guess. Could've been worded a lot better.

Vote: Lay. Not really that good of a battle, but somebody has to win.

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Lay, first punch was decent...good opener.

lamp...first punch....whack..2nd punch....aatleast you attempted some wordplay..but it's still not very good

Lay, 2nd punch was just as bad as lamps worst..

so this battl is obviously going to be decided off of the best lines....therefor Lay fear takes it..

v/ lay fear

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lays 1st was played as hell on lampejo. 2nd was a sig punch, a lame flip, and horribly worded.

lamps 1st was a lame ass flip. u coulda done a lot more than point-out a spelling error. wordplay in the 2nd was maaad played. and wtf @ stale fart.


i don't think eitha deserve my vote here. if i decide who edges this i'll edit.

weak on both sides V/Lay for the less wacker punch