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05-02-08, 11:30 AM | #1 | |||||||
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Love,the Stereotypical.
IP: F333 1CC2
Something i literrally key typed on my phone,its been a while but here it is.
If love was just words in my head Undescribable but never forgotten The death of thoughts The suicide of plans to be For that simple happy ending Where dreams never fade An illusional reality mists these young romanctic eyes Until the day you depart these young inveigling arms Where the love of unspoken words become lost feelings Til' your eyes cross my path The essence of your voice entrances my heart For the next time we meet again. Last edited by Supreme. : 05-02-08 at 11:33 AM. |
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05-02-08, 04:20 PM | #2 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 2998 9024
its nice for a small short peice bro, its lacking structure though. Poems are also about the visual aswell as the content. I like a few of your lines, theres some cool emotion in it.
Stay dropping man, it was a good read. |
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05-02-08, 08:09 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: F333 1CC2
thanks man. but this aint really a poem just feeling in words thats why there is no structure.
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