Uhmmmmm.....''IT'S ANOTHER ONE.''

Round 3, It's a K.O Playerrrr....


This a lil story rite here...so pay attention, 'cause ya might not Waaaake up!

Verse:
Yo!........It's bright and lonely at the top, Homie if only I would stop...
.................Shut up shop, no more workin on ya' block....................
then you may aswell stick a gun to my temple and fire the fuckin' shot.
'Cause I was raized in the south...so ya know I walked Thru Dirt.......
I'm nappy rooted, suited 'n booted, so dont talk ta me about Hurt
put bitch niggas in a skirt, leave 'em red - man & ''time 4 sum aksion''
my gang touch you up...now you's just another link in my chain reaction
You better warn the real, i'm born to kill......here to steal..........
......The limelight, 'cause I rhyme-tight.....No Ice Needed.............
....My words shine-Bright, minds-right and straight on Point..
fuck all this chit-chat and entertainin, Just hand me a joint
Get heavily baked....Can I get some time alone for christ sake!
It's a damn mistake if the greater power doesnt preveil....
this young black male...comin up from the street.........
defeat is not an option, poppa got me poppin the heat
he said ....
''son if you gettin beat, no lookin back..jus pull the trigger''
''and dont ever take mercy on any bitch nigga''
'cause i'm the bigger - man...and if jigga man can...
then i'ma smoke the LA, LA, LA....
Until my caskets ready
and it's BYE, BYE, BYE
HA, HA, HA....
I ask 'em to battle and they talkin like foxy sayin ''This Kidz Ill-NaNaNa''


:It's Over:...fall back...

Ya gotta admit...
THE MAN'Z FIRE, Y'all out for blood?
but scared when I'm poppin onions...like a Vampire
I AM HIGHER....Like 4 steps above.....................
Right now your readin the reason Met gets no Love
Kids aint nothin but wet-up-thugs...I'm like whattup bloodz?
they act gangsta but under confrontation sayin....
..............''you got me mistaken with somebody in yo' hood''
they say I'm Always up to no good, I know its just not fair.........
but you only got yourself to blame...
..........'cause your sayin ya own name like you actually gotta Pair
but WHAT IF...We was actually on the frontline....
No more blunt-time...would you still claim to be....DOPE?
Or would you bitch in a corner...talent useless and ya relying on hope?
and WHAT IF...My life was in a critical situation, would you even prey?
then you saw the clappin about to happen....would you even save the day?
or just sit and say ''...damn, he actually thought I'd have his back''....
then again...what makes you so sure I wont just pull out a gat?????
release the hammer back.....aim straight for your heart........
I make this shit so ugly no wonder they callin it modern day art
they say I'ma beast on the mic...all because I love to hog.......
ya bite aint as tough as ya bark...
....................so be a good boy and fetch the leash, DOG.
I stay writin for hours...shine like rainbows after showers
so let'cha reign pour..I got the umbrella and ready for war..
'cause i'm the type of guy to be at'cha front door....
armed witta poncho beggin for more, i'd be strapped on tour
rollin witta whore...she trynna catch the illness....dick is the cure
an the antidote being a pun..rifle in one hand....in the other is my gun
one's for fightin, the others for fun, both lookin for bitches to blow a load
....and leave 'em numb, now your grievin' son for ya knocked up sister..
and ya glocked up brother... all thats left is you and your mother...
to sit reminscin bout old times and to mourn with eachother.

ITS FUNNY...

Funny how kids playin on the net...pretendin to be rap vets
actin like they got a fuckin gift?...HA! Y'all can't even [w]RAP YET!
It's ya boy from the mack-set...buck.marley, smokin you herbs!
now you know why my rhymes kill cliches such as..ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER THAN WORDZ!

I like this right here it was really good. Nice multies and nice flow. I wont critique ur structure cuz i think everyone sees it differently in their own opinion. But if u can read it nice then its all good. My favorite line was:

Funny how kids playin on the net...pretendin to be rap vets
actin like they got a fuckin gift?...HA! Y'all can't even [w]RAP YET!
It's ya boy from the mack-set...buck.marley, smokin you herbs!
now you know why my rhymes kill cliches such as..ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER THAN WORDZ!

^^loved that really nice way to end the piece. Overall i'd give it a 9/10. Good job man, keep it up. Pls RTF on Runnin' or Shadows. Links are in my sig.

Thanks, yo..

Uppin this

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..I Smoke..A Large Portion Of Cheeba...My Gun Games Sick...Like A Cough And A...Fever

Baaaaaaaaaare multi's everywhere
thats sick man
keep it up
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Thanks man, Uppin this............

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