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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Jacko 1 16.67%
Sinner 5 83.33%
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Old 08-10-04, 09:03 AM   #1
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Jacko vs Sinner

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Old 08-10-04, 09:04 AM   #2
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Jacko has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 09:04 AM.
 
Old 08-10-04, 09:06 AM   #3
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Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 09:06 AM.
 
Old 08-10-04, 09:20 AM   #4
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yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp

he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift

you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking

you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy

hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas
 
Old 08-10-04, 09:22 AM   #5
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Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike

dun 8 lines...merked..next
 
Old 08-10-04, 09:48 AM   #6
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word up...vote
 
Old 08-10-04, 11:05 AM   #7
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upping for votes..................................
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Old 08-10-04, 12:38 PM   #8
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upping for votes..................................
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Old 08-10-04, 01:07 PM   #9
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upping this shit.............................................. .......
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Old 08-10-04, 01:10 PM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Jacko

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Yo this guy won this because Sinner's line were wack AS FUCK. sorry but i thought your lines were wack episcallythe break fest ines but you made more sense LOL and sinner Jay-Z line shiiit nucca you cannot battle AND NEVER EVER talk about mama in a battle its WEEAK..! you dint even use multis' neither of you did... i think this was a weak battle but Jack auctually had punches while siller had stupid fillers
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Old 08-10-04, 01:12 PM   #11
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Voted For: Jacko

SINNER
yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp
^^^..NO...5/10
he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift
^^1ST LINE LOOKED GUD..IT FELL OFF..5/10
you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking
BLAH.WEAK...3/10
you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy
WTF?..THAT NOT GUD 3/10
hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas
^^LMFAO...FUNNY BUT WACK...4/10
20/50

JACKO
Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
hmm...ok 5/10
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
^^decent meta..no punch.dnt rhyme..5/10
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
^^started gud...fell off...4/10
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike
^^dont make sense really..weak..4/10
overall.18/40

overall jacko jus takes it...a few harder punches,u both came kinda weak though
vote-jacko
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Old 08-10-04, 01:33 PM   #12
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his shit didn't even rhyme lol?...................
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Old 08-10-04, 01:42 PM   #13
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Voted For: Sinner

Skinny mu fucka..i knock this clown in the dust
how ya gunna finish me..
5/10
.. when ya cant even finish ya breakfast
Talk about a sinner..well i break sins as i walk round
4/10
Dudes fake..this athiest with bibles in their hand
Talking through the toilet..the way you speak so much shit
cos what man..leaves a site..and then comes back as a bitch
5/10
Dont claim to be dope dogg...cos we all know you like me
Sinner couldnt Force a win...if he came wearing nike
5/10

yo jacko the wacko is about....... to drop some wack shit
you stink of tobacco and this bitch gotta problem wid a lisp
6/10
he's so ugly he had to copy jacko n got a brand new face lift
you think your it wid lyrics dat are garbabe n think ya gota gift
6/10
you think your winning adleast thats what your thinking
2 me ya stinking specially when you drop bars dat an't linking
6/10
you must be so crazy you think your as good as Jay Z
your lazy can't get out of ur bed wid ya dad when u get busy
6/10
hahah your crap you can't even rap i'll slap your mama
i'll ride her like a lama and it'll be hot like in da bahamas
6/10

came down 2 better punches and better wordplay and an overall better structure which went 2 sinner~wasent the best drop from both of u but overall it was alright

Jacko overall=50/100

Sinner overall=60/100
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Old 08-11-04, 08:58 AM   #14
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Voted For: Sinner

Sinner.......structure was good.....flow was there.......multies were good.....decent punches......personals o.k

Jacko.......structure wasn't there......flow trailed off a bit....no multies.......didn't come hard enough wit tha punches...no real personals..

Vote: Sinner
 
Old 08-11-04, 01:37 PM   #15
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