10-12 lines..no dick riding, no hate votes..ya'll know the deal....verses are due in 45 minutes....lets go

min 100 posts to vote...

i ai'nt spittn till you check your sorry ass in bitch

I AM CHECKED IN BITCH

It's Butcha's day to die - no great surprise - my flagrant rhymes are always "fuckin seen" like I used my dick to replace his eyes/
I laugh at your team, you battling me? - Your name proves you're gay coz you're only good for "handling meat"/
Believe me it's easy, kid - you're feenin to see the end - but I'm only "throwing up jokes" like bulemic Comedians!/
I'm fortified for your demise, so come forth and die - coz I'm the best thing at "R.B.'s" since the curly fries! (Arby's)/
My sinister plots and gimmicks are raw - but your fans "never have their hands up" like digital clocks!/

People On Here Aint Realizing I'm Da Savage Type/
How You Come 2 Rip Da Butcha And Bring A Plastic Knife/
Ya Gay Metaphors Prove You Strugglin On Ya Thinkin Power/
This Niggas Poetic Tendency Is Singin In Tha Shower/
He Trying 2 Bring The Drama/
When He Really At Home Typing In Spongue-bob Pajamas/
You Wack On Ya Way 2 Horrible/
You Wouldnt Be Sick If You Put Ya Finga Down Ya Throat Like Anirexsic Models/
Somebody Other Than Me Tell This Faggot He's Gay/
Judging By All Tha Homo Lines You Aint A Boss Tha Only Thing You Master Is Bate/
Talking Bout Me Handling Meat I'ma Stay Calm/
Cuz Ya Hands More Beat Up Than Construction Workers Palms/
You Da Faggot. He Be Puttin His Legs Up Around Men More Than A Dojo/ He's Stiff On His Own Dick Like A Paralyzed Homo/
Easy 1

uppin for a vote or two niggas......peace...drop a link and I"ll hit it up with honest feedback

I think both verses came hard... Both had good punches and lines that stood out... Lines from poetic that stood out...
Believe me it's easy, kid - you're feenin to see the end - but I'm only "throwing up jokes" like bulemic Comedians!/
I'm fortified for your demise, so come forth and die - coz I'm the best thing at "R.B.'s" since the curly fries! (Arby's)/
Thought they were both funny.

And Butchas lines...
How You Come 2 Rip Da Butcha And Bring A Plastic Knife/
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This Niggas Poetic Tendency Is Singin In Tha Shower/
Pretty funny also.

Thought, And butcha ya need to work on this... If ya did ya verses would be sick. You need to make sure ya lines rhyme..

Vote goes to Poetic

shit... 100 posts. Damn kid. Well then atleast i got my mind in. Anyways since i TRIED to atleast vote... Can ya vote for mah battle with ][\/][.o.|B

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115572
Theres the link... Thx

somebody vote...damn....this is sorrier than I thought it was

damn ya'll....lets get some feedback up in here.....I'll hit up any link with honest feedback....peace

uppin' 4 votes no sacremento haters............................

uppin 4 votes uppin 4 votes

I Give This To Butcha.both Verses Were Damn Good But The Beginning Of Poetic Verse "butcha Day To Die No Surprise" It Aint Really Interest Me But As I Read It Got Good As Hell Tha Boy Got Skills.butchas Verse Had Me In The Beginning "coming To Butch Tha Butcha But Got A Plastic Knife".he Saying Nigga Im Invincable.it Was A Hard Choice Though 2 Be Real About It.

what happen to the vote uppin............................................. .....