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Old 04-04-06, 06:09 PM   #1
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Old 04-04-06, 06:18 PM   #2
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k typing as I listen....k..got a pac clip in intro koo, opened decent...I'm hearing u stumble on a few words...pronounciation hurting u a bit here...however aside from that ya flow has improved since I last heard ya...second half of verse delivery was pretty good def improved there....hook was decent...coulda been mixed stronger...ok another pac clip for outro it was good lil track..I was feeling lil story u told..I like the observer approach u took...good drop fam.......1
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Old 04-04-06, 06:34 PM   #3
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Thanks alot fam.......
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Old 04-04-06, 07:38 PM   #4
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my african brotha Inter aka Jea Stackz...neva knew u changed ya name...

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beat is nice emotional feelin..it

openin was cool you kinda stumbled on few words or u just tried to make it fit or somethin...but after awhile kinda felt the emotions come it..nice....malcom X and pac clips added nice but overall it could be a whole track let me know if u need someone to jump on it.
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Old 04-04-06, 08:40 PM   #5
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Word Up...There was no more space on da beat but we gotta do summin of our own specially fo this next mixtape and its martin luther king sample ..haha pz out my nugga
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Old 04-05-06, 05:13 AM   #6
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Old 04-05-06, 08:29 AM   #7
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Your ad libs were waaaaaaaaaay off the scales EQ wise...It sounded like someone was mumbling in the background...Here's a tip, take the Lows out of your ad libs...It's not necessary...Other than that, your main vocals had crisp quality...

The flow was fairly good...the hook was sorta Nas "I know I can"-ish...

not bad


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Old 04-05-06, 11:39 AM   #9
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word yup on da positive vibe..and thanks fo the tip imma def do dat fo the next track
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Old 04-05-06, 11:51 AM   #10
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Ite.....feelin the beat....Openin was good.....flow was on point it's got alot better.....emotion was good...pressence was nice.....n yo feelin the lyrics they were nice especially the like about heaven/hell nice line.......damn is that it pretty short track thought there was mo.......Overall 8.7/10 Good drop mayne...keep up.
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that pure vol site looks SICK man....for real....intros tight...beats ok...quality is a bit muddy...maby watch wen u hard limit...or the graphix EQ'n n shit...flows iight...emotion is lacking a bit...delevery is ok...idk about the hook...u shoulda deff used more emotion in it...lyrics were good..not a bad track

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