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String9487 5 55.56%
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Old 12-08-04, 09:06 PM   #46
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uppin for votes holla at ya boy.........................
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Old 12-09-04, 12:22 AM   #47
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aiight this was actually a decent battle....

string ... i liked your multies and metaphors but thats basically all your verse was... metas and mulites... you need harder hitting punches because half your lines were wack and the other half were just decent... your still too basic... and your structure was fucked make the lines even count the syllables believe me it will help with the flow and the structure which you need help on

overall : 5.3/10

faceless:

your verse was also basic... nothing too exciting nothing too wack just basic... you had a couple good punches and a couple good metas but you need to work on your structure too... and putting ..........'s at the end of your lines doesnt help your structure just even them up more... you had some good nameplays in there so im giving this battle to you for a bit more complexity

overall : 6.7/10

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Old 12-10-04, 06:01 PM   #48
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no it def wont improve my flow i know what the fuck im doing i wish people would stop hatin on my style freal
 
Old 12-11-04, 06:09 PM   #49
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Old 12-11-04, 11:04 PM   #50
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Old 12-12-04, 09:48 PM   #51
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