some mutherfuckers think think they know my life
but these people can't possibly understand the strife or the struggle
that seemed like a unsolveable puzzle
the thought that i won't be able make it from this place they call hell
the cell, should've been thankful that it was considered to be jail
and it ain't what you think, i was on the brink of lose'n the trail
lost my mother to a pussy who was 40 that had a mind that was 12
could've been one of those mutherfuckers whose ready to release those shells
empty the gage on the shelf and send that fagget to hell
but what good would that do, truth be told
shit like this could happen to you, the story unfolds
i was confused, couldn't think straight, but i knew how to cock this semi
these pussy's don't know, this is the documentary of Jimmy
some shit about to change i'm show'n you my pain
on where my name was originated and how it was catapulted to fame
some of these people won't be able to understand this flow
and some of these people just won't know
if they don't look pass what is put before them
the fact that some of these cats claim i flow like slim
i'm give'n these people somethin completely different from him
but if yall can't take it maybe you should consider me like EM
maybe then you'll find out the shit that i went through
and possibly see the difference between me, him, and you
Jimmy ain't just a mutherfuck'n shit talker that runs his mouth
it's a story on me and how i came about
why i talk about these guns and how i'm the King Of the South
and putt'n these fingers up and not give'n a fuck about these bitches that doubt
i've been where some of these rappers claim they've been
did what some of these rappers claim they've did
got out of the shit, but i didn't lose my sense
made amends to my enimies but still feel a little bit tense
that's why i stay with these guns, they got my back in this bitch
don't try to just read this, understand where i'm come'n from
so what if it ain't in perfect form, that ain't about nothin
i ain't fuss'n, just show'n you how Jimmy too went through hustle'n
this is true shit, i'm bring'n you people some new shit
hit after hit, i'm show'n the ametures how to do this
understand that i ain't nothin to fool with
cause i do this shit fluent, that means i'll never lose it

yo! i know the flow is off a little, but please look pass that and see where i'm come'n from!

This was a alright piece....try to keep your lines around the same length, sometimes you cant but should try....your vocab was ok, could be up'd a little....flow was off a little, but it was ok, work on some internals to help the flow out, and try adding some more multies to it....overall it was a alright piece....keep at it....and keep dropping.