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Old 12-16-04, 11:56 PM   #1
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13. Troop Vs. 21. Mike Hawk

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Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

12 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

Troop Has Gotten For$aken's Seed Of #13 And His Spot In The Tourney Since For$aken Signed Out... I Didnt Want A 3 Way Match So I Switched Troop's Seed.
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Old 12-17-04, 01:08 AM   #2
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Merk Squad.........Nuff Said
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Old 12-17-04, 04:01 PM   #3
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here we go again.......
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Old 12-19-04, 01:09 AM   #4
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Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*

Soc...Yes my Hated rival Socrates put me up on sumtin 2 day
he told me i dont kno wha a Punch is ...but i have Potential
Propz 2 that ni99a 4 that....Told me str8 up...so ima step back
look at some of the Rv greats...try 2 get a feel 4 Punches
I kno my concepts and shit are good..Jus my Punches dont
come across 2 certain people...

But i got a grudge on my Shoulder Now....cuz im constantly Called
Overated....I promise u i wont Disappoint in the Rv Text Tourney



Troop...
Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off
You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must
So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck?
Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you
And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you
Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass
Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance
Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya
One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers
Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through
So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do
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Old 12-21-04, 01:51 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Pop Lotty
here we go again.......


........This time its Personal

This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats
Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats
Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta
Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na?
12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy
U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy
Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz
2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz?
12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted
Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted
Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?


....Its Nuthin.......Nuff Said..

Read his Sig. look at his Avy....Explains It all
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Old 12-21-04, 03:37 AM   #6
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Troop a little hint for you... Dont put explanations at the bottom of your verse... It offends the voters as to you saying they are 2 stupid to figure out your punches...

But yeah this was a good battle i will edit my shit with the vote when i come back online... Just wanted to give troop that little hint

Oh yeah one more thing... Mike what the fuck is up wit your verse...? Why did you not rhyme your shit except for your closer... kinda stupid if you ask me but umm yeah like i said ill edit this again when i get time

Last edited by led poetic : 12-21-04 at 03:41 AM.
 
Old 12-21-04, 01:00 PM   #7
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pop lotty:

Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off
^^decent personal 6/10
You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must
So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck?
^^i liked this it was kinda basic but it hit hard 8/10
Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you
And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you
^^decent 5/10
Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass
Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance
^^decent 5/10
Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya
One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers
^^your dopest bar good meta's 8/10
Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through
So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do
^^ decent 6/10

overall : 38/60 (63%)

troop :

This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats
Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats
^^ good opener 7/10
Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta
Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na?
^^ why the heeta and teena just say heater/heata and tina decent 5/10
12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy
U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy
^^decent personal wack set up 4/10
Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz
2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz?
^^wack 4/10
12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted
Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted
^^your dopest bar 9/10
Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?
^^dope closer 8/10

overall : 37/60 (62%)

vote: Pop Lotty
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Old 12-21-04, 07:50 PM   #8
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Pop Lotty
Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off
best opener lol-- 8/10
You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must
So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck?
hard hitting, coulda been worded better 7/10
Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you
And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you
nice…. 7/10
Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass
Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance
decent.. 6/10
Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya
One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers
c’mon Mike Wack… 0/10
Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through
So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do
aight closer.. 7/10
35/60 ~58.3%

Troop
This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats
Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats
vocab-centric, but aight….. 6/10
Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta
Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na?
best line in your verse.. 9/10
12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy
U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy
worded badly, eh 5/10
Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz
2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz?
c’mon Troop.. Wack 0/10
12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted
Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted
lmao nice one… pretty good.. 8/10
Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?
this was an aight closer… 6/10
34/60 ~56.7%

It’s clear that Troop had the vocabulary in this match.. Too much is unnecessary, it throws off your flow and doesn’t help when you try to deliver a hard hitting punch.. Your best line was the one about Mike battling Ike with the connection to Tina Turner which gave you had the upper hand for minute, u had nice multis and analogies (metaphors) I have noticed, but u tried to get too technical when it was not necessary which messed it up for you.. Not a bad verse but some un-useful lines in there.. Mike, in a similar situation, you had sum wordplay but no multis.. You had the better flow and your vocab wasn‘t stretched.. Both of you had nice structures. Mike took this because he had harder hitting punches in his verse….

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Old 12-21-04, 09:48 PM   #9
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ahah@that Tina Turner line you, woulda been sick if you worded it better
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Old 12-21-04, 11:01 PM   #10
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Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off

^Nice opener

Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through
So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do

^Decent closer

Next…

This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats
Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats

^……Decent

Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?

^No…

MH took this one
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Old 12-22-04, 12:10 AM   #11
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your not even in the voteing council...ban this ni99a
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Old 12-22-04, 02:33 PM   #12
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Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off
You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must
So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck?
Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you
And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you

Vs.

Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta
Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na?
12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted
Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted
Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?

Vote: Mike due to a better overall verse

troop you had vocab but your punches just wasnt working
 
Old 12-22-04, 02:45 PM   #13
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mike hawk won that shit
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Old 12-22-04, 03:53 PM   #14
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Closed. Mike Hawk wins 4-0.
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