Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

14 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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TitoBronsky
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Mimesis
9th Degree
Un'Touched
Viscosity
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yeah yeah check... and what the fuck i was supposed to battle empire this round homos

checkin in...son u know I don't no show..its all good

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Things you must know to get the personals:

1. He is a heavy weed smoker

2. couple days ago he slammed his middle finger in his car door & had to go the hospital.

3. He was banned from RB for biting

4. his AIM name is SK and Alz 81

5. He has an SC page wit tracks he spit an he has a very high voice


You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit"
Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin'
But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes......................
..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'"
Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple
Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple"
Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son"
U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"...............................
......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun
Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck
Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck"
In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers
Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger"
RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you?
Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious..................
.......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too

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Bye...



Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this..
But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig
Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin..
Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition
I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch
Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits
I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors
Whats worse is...
Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper
^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet
And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet
Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit??
When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is
You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch..
After I murder ya you'll feel at home...
Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is

Triple N:
You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit"
Decent opener, ok personal
Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin'
But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes......................
..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'"
Decent setup, punch was lacking
Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple
Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple"
Good wordplay here, had to read it twice but I uderstood it
Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son"
U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"...............................
......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun
Dope setup, nice wordplay, punch hit, but could've been worded better
Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck
Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck"
Lol good multis in setup, punch hit, even had me laughin' a little bit
In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers
Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger"
Decent personal
RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you?
Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious..................
.......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too
Another decent personal, but mixed with a cretive punch. nice closer

Led Poetic:
Bye...Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this..
But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig
Decent personal, but the bar didn't really rhyme, so opener was blah
Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin..
Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition
Good personal, made up for a weak setup
I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch
Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits
Decent meta here
I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors
Whats worse is...
Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper
Another good personal here, nice punch too
^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet
And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet
Nice wordplay in the punch, overall a good bar
Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit??
When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is
Decent personal, creative way to word a "gay" punch
You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch..
After I murder ya you'll feel at home...
Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is
Nice play off his name, good closer overall

As close as this one was, I'ma have to give it to Led Poetic. His opener was weak, but he made up for it with the rest of his verse. Punches/personals/metas stayed consistent. Trip you had a good verse too, some nice punches and wordplay, but the thing that brought your verse down was the personals. You used personals that I wouldn't have got unless you had the explanations, so that was a negative aspect of your drop. But no hate, keep bangin'...

V// Led Poetic

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CrhymeSindicate

'Till Death

You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit"
lol nice
Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin'
But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes......................
..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'"
no
Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple
Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple"
decent
Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son"
U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"...............................
......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun
ehhh
Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck
Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck"
decent
In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers
Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger"
pretty good
RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you?
Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious..................
.......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too
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Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this..
But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig
pretty good
Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin..
Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition
wait is it just me or is this almost a complement it started out good than you said he had bad breathe but his audios come out in mint condition....mint-good smelling blahh
I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch
Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits
lol nice
I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors
Whats worse is...
Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper
nice
^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet
And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet
nice, nice wordplay
Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit??
When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is
ehhh not really
You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch..
After I murder ya you'll feel at home...
Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is
ight....

aight this was a close battle.......tripple N came pretty good throughout his verse.......but led peotic had like three dope bars and then 3 aight bars......this was a really close battle.........but ima go with led poetic because he had some harder hittin punches.

v/Led Poetic

Before this thread was cleaned Led had PMed will a peer to take Lady Fiyah off the voting counsel of this before he dropped and I took her place to disarray confusion



Triple_N's Overall Verse: 27/70
Comments:
You had alot of personals that just werent used good at all...you said he hurt his finger, but you didnt put much use of that....you just had alot of personals that you didnt use good...and you used alot of forced wordplay....try using wit and drop the quotes...




Led Posaken's Overall Verse: 35/70
Comments:
You had a pretty good verse for the most part....not much on personals, but better punches and better use of the personals you had...


Vote - Led Poetic/Posaken

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