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Old 06-26-04, 05:14 AM   #1
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I'm kinda struggleing at da moment with my flow when spitting lines that rhyme because I see so many differen't ways of rhyming it's kinda confuzing me. Can you please explain how it fits together with words and rhyming words, cause i see alot of half rhymes like spineless and mindless for instance instead of criminal subliminal for an example. This is what is confuzing me cause I don't know which way is best in rap, so can I have an answer for everything I just said. Need this explaining very well so I can elevate, thanks. Peace
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Old 06-26-04, 05:50 AM   #2
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^^Start with rhymin dictionary.

It will help you.
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Old 06-26-04, 06:00 AM   #3
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I actually have one and it does help you lyrically, but still confuzed about other topics like little rhyming like I said. I do understand perfect rhyming sort of... Just need everything explaining to me perfectly how to set it, in order for me to elevate and it would be kool if you could give me a lesson cause I can be creative. I wanna develop my own style but need to know everything b4 I can do dat. Peace
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Link me couple of battles of yours!!
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Old 06-26-04, 07:39 AM   #5
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just find dem from tracking dem, it's easy.
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read the dictionary, or if you have one, a electronic dictionary, just flip open ur dictionary to any page, rhyme as many words you can with that word u see, good practise dawg, keep practising and elevate!
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Then I get confuzed with iternal rhyming because theres so many differen't ways to elevate man, and I can't do it because I need to be shown everything perfectly all da types of rhymes you can do, and how to set it... If you can have time will you please, I have managed to take care of that freak N site for you and got him banned, yippe. People that don't know him, he as threaterning everyone to die. So i've done you all a favour now please can you return it back to me.
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this guy has potential if he got a rhymin dictionary n shit...jus read other peoples raps and copy their style...then after you get a hang of how it's pos' to look like you can make up your own rhyme scheme
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Old 06-27-04, 05:54 PM   #9
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I'm kinda struggleing at da moment with my flow when spitting lines that rhyme because I see so many differen't ways of rhyming it's kinda confuzing me. Can you please explain how it fits together with words and rhyming words, cause i see alot of half rhymes like spineless and mindless for instance instead of criminal subliminal for an example. This is what is confuzing me cause I don't know which way is best in rap, so can I have an answer for everything I just said. Need this explaining very well so I can elevate, thanks. Peace


Ya need to listen and sample from artist like outkast ......etc.

read there lyrics with the song going. that will help u alot.

go to ohhla.com

and try to start freestylin to slow paste beats. it helps for me
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If u have a big vocabulary than it wuold be a little easier 4 u but just try 2 get that rhyim dictionary.
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im brand fucking new? whats a rap dictionary?
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Old 06-27-04, 10:16 PM   #13
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im brand fucking new? whats a rap dictionary?


omfg seriously^^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!! search on google or something for it!
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Old 06-27-04, 10:26 PM   #14
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so its just rapdict.org? slang term? ehh whats the big deal about that.... i thought what u meant a book where u just make.....rhyming words?
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Old 06-28-04, 04:19 AM   #15
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I think this is what you want man... These are a few of the good techs i know of. All of them will help you elevate.

Multi's- A method of meter where you rhyme a phrase, usually with the same syllable count, which typically goes AB-AB. Example:

"I'll break-ya-neck and rake-ya-check." (Awe-dio)

> You often here people say multies are the best and if ya don't have 'em then your shit, but that's not necessarily true. Multies are excellent tools and become almost impossible not to use once you get better, but explore other things too.



Inners- It really means 'internal rhymes.' They are rhymes within a line before the end. If you have 2 multies in the same line, they are multie-inners:

Teachin "rooks n the users", "look at these losers".. i roll wit the winners
from "sunset to sun down", "son's set gets gunned down" .. now those are some inners (Awe-dio)

I know the "pain" the "game" "bring", I did the same "thing" (Wu Tang)

> Inners are great, but don't use too much of them or your shit will sound messed. The latter example of inners here shows one that's close to that (try to say it quick), but it still works.



Alliterations- Words after one another that have the same starting sounds. Examples are here:

"Terminal tactics taken in Time, like tortured turmoil toasted in twine.
Twisted in tricky troubling whines, wondering whom what where when and why."

> I think this is the easiet thing to get into first and help you improve flow. In my opinion, try these before other shit liek inners and multies if you're new.



Outro/Enders/Closers - Well I call them closers, but it's just the last bar/line of the battle.. I think they are very important and should just make jaws drop if possible. Some examples:

"So spit your second verse, and I'll predict how the peeps-vote /
The only thing your winning round here, is "best at deep-throat"..."

"Your worse, see, no punch of yours can hurt-me /
Quit talking smack before I smack ya right into verse-three..."

> These last lines are usually paid attention to the most and what the reader is left with. If you can make these good, you will most likely have a good general effect (provided you have at least something decent in your middle verse).



Call-backs- Rarely used in the forums, they should still be explained if people want to expand their arsenal.. People may not get them because they are a part of a more complex rhyme scheme. Basically, what call-backs are, is when the start of the first line rhymes the end of the second line, and the end of the first line rhymes the start of the second.... example:

Teachin a lesson, here's a mutha fuckin call-back
don't stall-jack or u'll fall-flat when i reach for the wesson (Awe-dio)

> It may look weird, but if you try to actually rap call backs, they flow pretty well most of the time.


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