My tongue moderates my flows but the slums operates my doe
Eat spinach fast just to diminish an ass slap cats and throw
Beef like pop eye got a plot fly that’ll knock out a guy
Got the great power to take a shower and immerse my body
In water now I can rap wise because I’m baptized and party
In church but Bacardi will touch my brain then smartly
Search for dames receive much flames just to feel their booty
“Boo lets have fun tonight while a shaft of sunlight bring a moody
Atmosphere into the room, you’ll begin to bloom like flowers
I would like to secure me to a bed, kiss my lips pure red for hours”
“Oh MADD my candies are in order right? And my pink
Panties are watertight want to cum and do extreme damage I think
To my cream sandwich on the blink while it hot and wet as a sink
My body about to fry vexed so it an outcry for sex panties shrink
Like cheap fabrics making love is a freak habit but yet on the brink
To give MADD SOME its sad and dumb to get wet and pregnant
Right now” “aw come on and share lady I’ll take care of the baby in this segment”

WACK mines betta ....pz 1

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OYD MAFIA

-UNF- not from the rap stand point you need to learn how to write like this so you can communicate with regular people

rofl your wack ...bye

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OYD MAFIA

whack mean unusual tell the folks what's unusual abou this rhyme see your whack ass can't do it even though i don't get credit my rhymes are everywhere right now

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204688)

yea dey everywere cos ur no life keeps postin em on every forum to exist despite bein told for da past 6 years your absolutely fuckin terrible.... vget a life dude

and wack doesnt mean un-usual.. wack means awfull.. terrible.. not good.... so your retarded aswell as a wack MC???

damn what dictionary yall below average fucks use whack is really wack which mean unusual ok sense yall too fucking whack to talk to a girl guess this rhyme don't pertain to you HA! HA! HA! BELOW AVERAGE FUCKS TRYING TO LOOK DOWN

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ok.......... nice flow and rhymes were nice. didn't make much sesne when u read it all together, but free's usually don't. too bad u got beef wit Trigga Town, we might have been able to do a collab. ah well, fuck it. 7/10, keep it comin.

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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