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Old 11-16-05, 07:21 AM   #1
Dirty Nigga
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I'm Just Rhymin'..........

IP: 0846 6CD0

Even when I ain't here little nigga...GUESS WHAT? I Run RV!!..


..:Based On A True Story:..

My Life, My Life, My Life...MY LIFE.


Verse:
Yooo!/I got led posion in my raps...the flows at the top...
bet ya bottom dolla my middle fingers rose to your Block. :
Askin me my name? Shit...you should have listened before..
The Names TEPH, nigga...a.k.a Hard dick in your whore...
always wantin more..but they say I'm to smart too rhyme
so they put me on the cover of the latest RAW Design...
go to war with cryhme..
.........end up lookin like the carnage of a hardcore bash..
smash n dash...wipin' that fuckin silly grin off your ass...
I'm out for cash....live for the green...give to my queen..
I want each piece of the pie...so my girls takes all the CREAM.
My worlds like a Dream...even if Im no artist...an droppin Text..
U Know Ya boys got more ''Multies'' than a damn Shoppin-Plex...
Stay stoppin-vets...from elevation...ya rhymes dont Re-Up...
Y'all audio heads can patronize the rest...But cant see-us..
So G-Up...get ya knee-cut...and lose a couple pounds...
'cause if we go punch for punch you wont even last a couple rounds..
This how trouble sounds...or reads...however you wanna take-it...
'cause the feedback on your tracks is like pornstars...people FAKE-IT.
I'll make-hits.....Get that money for a win........
Oh and my songs aint on the radio...but my revolver spins (Yup!)
I've been known to ''Sin''...But thats whats expected from my squad..
And on this board....Y'all people got me feelin' like GOD....
Cant touch or see me...But im here and you know you Need-me..
the way I'm controllin ya life...you get a cross and start to believe-me.
I'ma SickSeed - See...Gotta evil deed In me....'Bout to set it free...
dont want it with me...
.......ask Mimesis...when its On hes like ''yo cant we just let it be?''
but aint shit slidin...I got to much pride - in my blue blood.....
Go ahead an say I dont rhyme...Cause I just explain shit real good.
break it down proper...the show stopper...walkin witta chopper..
each line is quoted and ''Jaws-Droppin'' like you's a Pill-Popper.
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Old 11-16-05, 07:37 AM   #2
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214688
Feed ^

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Old 11-16-05, 03:26 PM   #3
Call_it_Murder01
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Whatt up famz...i can see you love dat nigga Jigga, props rude bwoy thats what I'm talkin' about...

This piece was HOT...Like seriously there was nuthin' wrong with it really..A couple longer barz thats about it though..

I got led posion in my raps...the flows at the top...
bet ya bottom dolla my middle fingers rose to your Block.
^^^^Dope beginning duke

Askin me my name? Shit...you should have listened before..
The Names TEPH, nigga...a.k.a Hard dick in your whore...
always wantin more..but they say I'm to smart too rhyme
so they put me on the cover of the latest RAW Design...
go to war with cryhme..
^^^^^^LOL a.k.a dick in ya whore line...Nice raw design line

.........end up lookin like the carnage of a hardcore bash..
smash n dash...wipin' that fuckin silly grin off your ass...
I'm out for cash....live for the green...give to my queen..
I want each piece of the pie...so my girls takes all the CREAM.
^^^^Smack that fuckin' silly grin off your ass line was nice. LOL my girl takes all the CREAM

My worlds like a Dream...even if Im no artist...an droppin Text..
U Know Ya boys got more ''Multies'' than a damn Shoppin-Plex...
Stay stoppin-vets...from elevation...ya rhymes dont Re-Up...
Y'all audio heads can patronize the rest...But cant see-us..
^^^^^Nice wordplay with the multis line..

So G-Up...get ya knee-cut...and lose a couple pounds...
'cause if we go punch for punch you wont even last a couple rounds..
^^^^^Last couple of rounds line was nice

This how trouble sounds...or reads...however you wanna take-it...
'cause the feedback on your tracks is like pornstars...people FAKE-IT.
I'll make-hits.....Get that money for a win........
Oh and my songs aint on the radio...but my revolver spins (Yup!)
^^^^^LOL like pornstars they fake it..revolver line was hot

I've been known to ''Sin''...But thats whats expected from my squad..
And on this board....Y'all people got me feelin' like GOD....
Cant touch or see me...But im here and you know you Need-me..
the way I'm controllin ya life...you get a cross and start to believe-me.
I'ma SickSeed - See...Gotta evil deed In me....'Bout to set it free...
dont want it with me...
^^^^^U love metas don't u? Lol...the mulits were nice in this part..

.......ask Mimesis...when its On hes like ''yo cant we just let it be?''
but aint shit slidin...I got to much pride - in my blue blood.....
Go ahead an say I dont rhyme...Cause I just explain shit real good.
^^^^Lol just let it be...other two lines were nice

break it down proper...the show stopper...walkin witta chopper..
each line is quoted and ''Jaws-Droppin'' like you's a Pill-Popper.
^^^^^iLL finisher my nigga..

Overall this drop was dope as hell, the multis, metas, flow and wordplay worked real well wit eachother yahmean..keep doin' ya thing fam

Make sure to check out my "Can I get a...Freestyle" and drop some feedback aiight duke ~1~
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Old 11-17-05, 06:09 AM   #4
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^ Appreciated, & I Left feed on your peice too man.

Uppin this.....
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Old 11-17-05, 06:20 AM   #5
Jae K.ing
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Blah Wasnt Feelin It...
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Old 11-17-05, 06:23 AM   #6
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Comments are always appreciated, thanks, go 'head drop a link and I'll RTF yo.

Uppin this....
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Old 11-18-05, 06:20 AM   #7
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Old 11-19-05, 05:17 AM   #8
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Old 11-22-05, 06:10 AM   #9
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Old 11-24-05, 07:22 AM   #10
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Old 12-13-05, 06:35 AM   #11
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Old 12-16-05, 07:34 PM   #12
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