Voted For: Kein Witz

Imagery- Blah..Kein got this..
Complexity- Kein by a lot..Pen's was a lil too simple
Vocab- Kein, I didn't really see any words that stood out from Pen's piece..he used a lot of repetive words...he said "everything" or a lot of "every"s. I know you meant to do that in some parts but I didnt think it sounded very well
Flow- Both..

One of Kein's verses-

EVERY minute of his meaningless life was always so boringly methodic.
People were alarmed by his day dreams and black-outs, gave him tonics.
[b]nice bar..decent vocab, flowed nicely
He'd imagine he was battling monsters, when really beating old seniles.
When friends told him it was make-believe he just shook his head, smiled.
lol funny and i liked how you explained that he was kind of blah about life in a cool way
They warned him not to have his dreams in the middle of driving his car;
he never listen, because in his mind he was drinking scotch with stars.
Nice line here too

Pen-

Everything is mediocre we stay adequate but not good
Everything in life must stay the same I wish it just could
meh it was ok i didnt think it sounded very well, kind of forced rhyming
Change so we can live our own life and not be controlled like a puppet
We get thrown away like garbage in the dumpster all we do is dump it
didnt sound well when you said 'dump'ster and 'dump' but nice line on explaining the way life is
Just the trash,
So we keep the changes to ourselves so it can’t be removed or altered
We live by the same failures but do we live by the faulted
nice closer..

Kein- Your piece was very nice good job on explaining the guy's everyday life i thought there were some funny parts too..nice flow vocab

Pen- Your was a lil too simple i thought it would be better if it had a stoyline..seemed like you forced some rhymes and the flow could be better too..

Sooo it was kind of one-sided to me...Vote/Kein

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