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11-28-05, 04:36 PM | #1 | ||||
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Intermental - Song Cry (hot shit)
IP: A4DB 1161
Yo peep this track..
This is a real outro, 3 verses of hot emotional finishing touches on the soul rebel mixtape..my uncle died durin the makin of this track, so im dedicatin this to him inderictly, hope he RIP..holla atcha boi..peep game.. WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL "SONG CRY" HOLLA ATCHA BOI..VOTE HOT IF U LIKE IT
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11-28-05, 04:39 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: A4DB 1161
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215766
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215571 ^^ tracks ive fed on
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11-28-05, 04:54 PM | #3 | |||
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IP: 1ADC A69C
need more HIGHS on ur vocals...too much rumble/lows
and I'm not exactly sure I like using Jay's hook verbatim...unless you put a new spin on it, which you didn't do Your rhyming has def. elevated a lot since you first started rappin...It was very simple and now it's solid at best lyrics personal = good flow was adequate, if not uninspired...cud be more expressive...that goes along with delivery...rather bland for this type of track... And, in my opinion, you didn't put enough of a different spin on this track to make me forget about Jay's version, the problem when you re-do a song or use a famous beat. Pretty decent track dawg keep droppin |
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11-28-05, 04:55 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: A4DB 1161
thanks homie......
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11-28-05, 05:07 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 356E B92B
Holy Shit
Dope Sample Vocals Lil Low FIrst Verse Yeah Flows dope Delivery Like Yours Love That Whisper Emotion In This I Feel THis Is Deep Lyrcis Are Nice As Hell Love Em Hook Word @ Delay/Reverb Upp Vocals THo Lil Low As I Sed 2nd Verse Same As Above But I Feel The Lyrics Better And Hook Again Lol 3rd Comes On Same As Above But Lyrcis Doper Lol Its like YOu Build it up Love It I Feel This A Lot Word To Dedicating It To Your Uncle Hope Hes In A Better Place OIverall 8/10 Good Drop
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11-28-05, 05:13 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: A4DB 1161
thanks dawg I apreciate that..........
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11-28-05, 11:26 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: 6AD2 8F43
Where Did You Get The Beat For Looking Back From?
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11-30-05, 02:08 AM | #8 | ||||
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IP: CC30 AB26
^^^thanks fo that great feed...and i cant remember !/....upp
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